DAFUQ?! I ain't no wife stealer! I don't steal wives! They are not to be stolen, they are to be won! :P
But yes, pretty impossible at that as well. Oh well, haha, at least I get to "win" my boss's wife, or so to say. :D
Why Le U K? :D Okay, didn't really make much sense, but hey, I tried! . Haha, it does sound funny. Funny in my head at least. :D
Long chapter, but yes, you kept it interesting. Lots of new characters, and a nice flash back story. But well, you did a mistake in that duel. Radia said that she emptied her hand, but in her next turn, she used a Hustle Castle and summoned a Balkerious Dragon. And wth is an Aqua Pit? When the heck did Surfer and Pit have an intercourse? Not that I am interested, though. .
Haha, Subaru still as feminine as ever! :P Well, anyways, good chapter, good duel. Didn't expect to see Bell Hell De Gaul being used, not with Ballom Monarch and Dorballom anyways. :D Untill next time.
PS: Work on your english grammer. :3

Praise the lord as this chapter is not long long long...like the previous one ..so here we have the "White-One" and the "Annihilator" which seems to be ( in my point of view) totally evil !

LOL this Blue 2 guy made me laugh so much ...he wants a private channel to b build for his love intrest charity ..lmao !

So back to Will and lol first thing is he get slapped..and lol " You mean that 2 meter drop onto the poor Regent? Yes, my puppy would survive that." ...hahaahahaha..haha so we have the remains of the chaos now like Ryu crushed under a woman...and the pain he is in ( poor Ryu) and wats this S.K Bog...SK SK oh wait , "Legendary sk gaming :o am guessing its skeleton king coz sand king can't be a legend :P

Poor Ryu the dragon lord after getting his butt broken he now has to sort tissue...how tragic :P and wow they are in a sumbarine... ( i thought it was a fancy boat :P )

So another great duel , this time a speed duel and holy mother of god , deadly fighter is a lizard.. :0 and all these years i have been thinking that it was a tribal warrior :P and after a a great duel .nooooo Lady Storm lost..noooooooooooooooooo

Now on the cliff side of centurus omg "your mother is so fat, that her butt crack can hold 40 cards" looool and " Regent Bliss if you are awaken, can you help me take my shoe off and lick my feet"...( am going to have a heat attack if i laugh like this ) and omg ! u cant troll around madman Bliss..dafaq he summoned Ida and and ordered him to do something nasty to those 3 jokers... ( poor people...they shud'nt have trolled with a madman :P ) and we have news of Captain Quinn ( the great pork man :P )..sad that he can't duel anymore in the coming years...and 2 new regents Gnat and Lecter now joins the scene ..

So, this is a great chapter with action , comedy and sadness ( death of Storm) and i really enjoyed this chapter very much :D

Omg ! chapter 13 is one hell of a lenghty chapter. Oh well lets get the review done with...

Professor Yami and Jey's research works makes me very curious about the banned cards and all the mysteries related with it and the "overload" thing.

Will regains his consciousness and then he remembers all that has happened in the past few hours..how his friend Subaru died :'( ( poor Will) ,he wanted to yell in but he could'nt :o only a toadlike croak came ( was he hexed ? :P )

So, we have a naked man over here ( dafaq , is he a male mermaid ? ) .Ok, this is pretty intresting Will finds himself at a place ( peaceful heavenly place) and he is told that it is a kind of realm only where duelists can enter and the mystery man is surprised that a duelist of Will's magnitude can enter in this realm through the "Gate". So there is something special about Will ( this is the second conclusion that Will is special, the first one was in the previous chapter) and "someone" enters through this mystery "gate".
We have so many mysteries to solve ,lol.

This "Empress Chirico" ..what is it ? a machine , a beast , an alien , a transformer ( :P ) , a satelite ...( i really need to see this thing )..
Will thinks the man in white obe is going to assault him as "Sexual Predator Attack " lmao..
So here is an explanation of what the 5 civilizations are best at.. so Will gets fortress from the man and we have a duel between Will and the mystery man and omg ! wat a big and magnificent duel..these fan fic duels are so impressive.

So after the duel ends Will tries to open the gate with all his might and when it open he saw the ground ten thousand meter below him :o . So the mystery challenger ( monk like ) is known as the "White One" and Will noticed that his hair is same like his own...this may mean that there may be some sort of connection between the two..and in the end Proffesor Yami detects the wave lenght of this mysterious "White One"...
wow this has been such a great mysterious chapter...more mysteries waiting for me in the next chapter :D

"Contamination of D-Waves at 90%." for some reason the phrasing seems kinda off.

"The bodies recovered...or the body parts that we were able to recover amount to about 40 people. That's about half the number of guards who were gathering at the breakfast table. Another 20 went missing, apparently turned into the ash that you are standing on." Pretty gruesome xD.

"weaved along the forehead" weaved? seriously?

"DMASTERS alert!" Ah so we finally get to know what D Wave meant. Nice way of putting it across.

Pwnage of rush :)

You portray Will as a boy who likes gruesome things :O

One thing I would like to say is that a hastily collected set of 40 cards cant beat a rush deck so easily. You should have made it a bit tougher for Ryu to beat that bot.

An awesome chapter.
Filled with both the story and the duel. The story actually starts from this chapter where the main characters and their avatars begin to be shown. Romanesk is an awesome card and ryu and hime are an awesome pair.
Coming to the duel, both the decks are based on dragons and ryu and shin are both Dragon Lords. The duel shows how even though both are dragon based , they are quite different and how luck (as in a single shield trigger here) can change the entire outcome of the game.
Shows the fight between ryu and shin and a hint of the actual story is given here.

Whoa ! chapter 12 is a very very long chapter ...which starts with a background story about scientists researching about the D wave ...and wat perfect place to set up secret hidden labs other than the Alps (in captain america that villian had it's labs in the Alps :P)we got to know about Prof. Yami and his research team. So the histroy part is all about the mysterious D wave ( which was bothering me earlier very much ), it's origin and all there is to know about it which has been explained briliantly taking the example of origin of sound waves from a violin ( author himself is an outstanding violin player :D )

"Captain Peeps even said that he cried when some stray newbie named Sana flashed him an Eternal Meteor Kaiser, which he desperately wanted one." lol...poor Peeps and we have a description of a video clip here..intresting. So it's Dracelo ( pyramid head lol ) vs Regent Flora and wow Dracula i mean Dracelo summons Zamaru.. one of the cutest darkness box :P

Tat crystal phalanx combo with slime veil was superb who could have thought about that combo...simply outstanding. Regent Flora uses Sanctuary of mother to summon Ultimate Galaxy Universe (The hottest creature in the world :D ).. wow when it attacked Dacelo the security camera got destroyed...so evil :P what must have happened to poor Dracelo ( he must have been sucked up in galaxy, lol) ..

In the end we see Illia climbing a cliff ( poor girl) and her beautiful dress getting teared up :(

So , this chapter was very very good indeed and loved the UGU...going for the next chapter now :D

"the time involved in this chapter...is confusing. Bear it with me" ... haha..yeah the meaning of Duel Masters must be very big so that must be the reason behind this big chapter :P

We have "pudding- pudding" here..who also has a umbrella :O . Coming back to the previous duel where Subaru forfeits against Regent Cheer and Subaru knows he isgoing to die but Will rushes in to save Subaru but it was a waste effort as Subaru died :'(

So now it's s double duel..wow and it's Lady Storm and Ryu against that madman Bliss and Sage Sage..and this "you male homo sapien with raging male hormones!" made me laugh for hours . So duel between Storm and Bliss gets heated as the latter summons Mad Romanoff , the Wicked God and starts his rampage of casting spells from mana..and summoning psychics and Storm summons Forever Meteor Kaiser and Mad Romanoff ( chubby God :P) gets cooked.

Storm talks about Hunter's dignity ( when Bliss evolves an alien over a hunter) but Bliss the madman talks of throwing away useless creatures to rot away, how cruel. Forever Meteor Kaiser speaks to Storm in her mind about his brother Gaial Kaiser ( wow creatures giving tips to duelists..good one ).

But something else is heating up as Will is raged about the death of Subaru and some spectacular phenomena is happening as observed by Dr. Yami and he says that some cards are going to get "banned" from being used.

All in all this is another great chapter and my suspense of reading the next chapter is building up rapidly :D

Chapter 10 " Cheer and Chirico", from it's name i am guessing that i will get to see Emperor Chirico in this chapter and we have Regent Bliss trapped here(serves him right for chasing other people :P) because of the mayhem caused by the Dead Sea Dragon.

In comes Regent Cheer with her "Invisible Suit" ( so apart from summoning creatures and casting spells duelists can also generate cross gears on themselves, cool ! ) . We have 2 sages here ( first i thought that sage of 6 paths has come to duel , lol).

The most funny thing is that Ryu running with Will tucked under his arm like a shepherd running with his sheep and Will telling him to put him down for which Ryu threm him down like a ball ( lmao). So in the midst of all action we are going to have a duel here between Subaru and Regent Cheer...yay another duel ! but what's this Emperor Chirico laid waste to a whole city by summoning mob of creatures :o ( so that explains why it is a banned card :P). So Empress chirico comes and it has satellite like wings :o, dress made of triangular planar structures, with long rod in it's center...what a creature ( made up of geometrical shapes..lol) and after the Empress comes in she sends 3 big creatures to aid her which are Cyber N World, Cyber A Iron, and Spell Del Finn..omg ! Subaru is so much toasted ( mainly due to Spel Del fin, at this early game )...here and he quits the duel. So thats the end of a short and great duel .

So chapter 9, Gallows and Gaial.. well as expected darkness is one scary civilization and the bigger the cost of creatures the more ruthless their effects are and in fact Zabi Mira is one big badass creature, so in this chapter we are going to see the " Hyperspatial Zone" which is described in the chapter as the "Chou Jigen Zone". The description of this new dimension is explained in the chapter very beautifully ( i always had the doubt of the hyperspatial zone, what i mean is how that zone was always isolated from the other 5 zones i.e. i always wondered why are there no spells to put a creature from mana or shields to the hyper zone, i used to wonder what is so special about this hyperspatial zone but just ignore it because it's only my thinking :P) . So after reading that i got to know that that certain creatures or spells has the power to generate a hole to form some kind of passage to another dimension from where powerful creatures can come. The details regarding this zone has been explained here quite beautifully.

So in comes Zabi Mira in the battle zone Vincen claims Quinn as the beacon of death, lol . The reviving shaman sounds evil just like the " Shadow Shaman" :P so Zabi Mira sacrificed 8 creatures and welcomes his psychic pals in the party..HELL YEAH !

What do we have here Captain Quinn suddenly wants to use the restroom :o and Vincen here links the 3 psychics to form the DEAD SEA DRAGON ..woooo what a majestic beast 3 . Poor Quinn he does'nt have the slightest idea what he is up against. Quinn gets pawned by the DEAD SEA DRAGON and sry for hanzou ( poor frog :P) and Zabi Mira which was the sole reason for all this himself ended the duel with a storm which resulted in the demolition of the D stadium (got to dmit that Vincen Shub has some style for ending up duels :P).

It's a very good chapter and i enjoyed reading it.

Wow chapter 8 seems to be a long one. Let's get going then so Will is a care free type of person who just went up to Regent Bliss and shook his hand with him to the surprise of the others behind Will who were doing gestures not to talk..and what's this about Blaze which i havent noticed funny indeed !
Well in comes Captain Quinn ( whenever i hear the captain word my mind always races back to Captain Ginyu of DBZ :P) and omg ! "rat like facial features " , loool .
Blaze covers Ryu and his friends from the Regent but the Regent is that type of perso who sure has a number of tricks, i mean spells under his sleeve...so here comes my favourite darkness spell Terror pit ( i was waiting for this spell only :P) and just like it's art a number of black hands went to tear apart Blaze but Blaze stands tall against terror pit due to it's immortality...ohh this action..and magic shot romanoff strike..but our heroes escaped safely much to the dismay of the Regent :P
So Blaze died :( so wat does it matter give it rest and it will spring back alive in no time :P The regent still hot on the chase and made romanoff making a hole with infernal sunrise...wheee Quinn fatso i think is about to duel with Shub but on the other side Will initiates a succesfull summon of Aegis, Sage of Fire and Lightning and destroys the god trio of Regent Bliss ..Holy S... !
So a majestic duel of Shub ( meat stick lol ) vs Quinn (pork man :P) gets started ..its a good duel and did i just see the word "fatty" :o...so i get to learn something here that when u duel against a control type deck u should plan to finish your opponent in 1 single turn or send shields to grave..so Quinn gave the card Vincen was waiting for all this time which is " Zabi Mira, the reviving Shaman"..which is sure to do something evil in the next chapter :) Poor Captain Quinn ...

Vincen gets trolled in the beginning ..tat Scooby Scooby Doo , lol and we have a new character here, Sana who knew Lady Storm for many years and also knew about her secret lair within the D stadium and also knew the password of that 10 tonne block of solid steel wall ,omg ( tats a good barrier, I dont suppose Lady Storm has a gold mine hidden somewhere in her secret lair :P) .
We now again have the fishy D- wave thing which seems to be emitting static electricity from anything related to summoning or duel like we have the "Deckcase" of Sana, also the D-Wave seems to be leaving some sort of trail from it's origin .which is pretty intresting.
So the DMRT agent summons a Mad Romanoff :o and at the same time within the lair they could sense what was cooking outside ,waiting for them ..and Lady Storm also has high tech gadgets installed in her secret chamber ..lovely ! and dafaq that mystery DMRT agent not only summoned that wicked God but also casted a spell , oh my my ! And that spell was the reason for the end of that 10 tonne steel block door..( feeling sorry for the end of such an impressive barrier :P )
All the action begins after the demolition of the door and what's this Wicked God is casting spells like Primal Scream :o ( y not Terror Pit ? loved to see the great terror pit :P) anyway the next piece of action was awesome ...no it was kinda epic , the formation of the tri link God and the mystery DMRT announcing himself as "Regent Bliss" ( like a boss :P).
So chapter 7 is short , which i like very much and it has epic action .

Chapter 6 is quite a long chapter...starting with the roasting of Totto Pichi by Bolshack dragon breathe of fire , poor Totto Pichi turning into turkey lol.
Kage Ryuuhoshi here is another dragon lord who certainly has some style.. and a cute fire bird Cocco Lupia (so i came to know that coco lupia's are the care takers of Dragons). A perfect summoning by the Dragon Lord himself to summon the part angel command and part armored wyvern creature Stardust Nex was awesomely portrayed in this chapter .
So Ryu seems to be a traitor or something :o but who cares if he is a traitor am enjoying the dragons here like Bolbazak such a majestic dragon ( now restricted to 1 ..lol) and while reading i came across a wonderful phrase that i liked very much, which is "If they bring us war, we'll bring them extinction."
And its Duel time once more without Rosetta Tablet this time :P. So , it's a dragon vs dragon duel and lol, we have a dragon festival in the mana zone ! Ninja strike 3: Falconer..slicing coco lupia in 2 ( poor bird) .
Oh tat great combo ..i have never ever seen anything like it...tats simply spectacular and mindblowing..which shows tat anything can happen in a duel . It teaches me never to lose hope and not to underestimate my opponent ( and also tats the reason Bolbazak Ex is restricted to 1 :P).
Whoa Death Dragerion the supernova sounds pure evil ! and the one who drew this magnificent beast his pen also trembled ...how evil :P
So its a nice chapter and that Bolbazak Ex was surely the star attraction of chapter 6.

So Will got good cards from Ryu in the previous chapter..and i think Jasmine is very special because its's so much alive and filled with joy so according to me Jasmine new form of mother Nature :P . Holy cards whats happening now 2 females coming and knocking off Will .ooh wats happening here...and adding to the troubles here D- WAVE has been detected. ( this D WAVE thing is very fishy indeed). So i think creatures emits D WAVE if their owners cant control their summoning or some thing like that . So our hero Will wakes up in a place which is safe from the D WAVE andit seems like it's DUEL TIME. So its gonna be Subaru who makes himself clear not to call him anything near to the meaning of "homosexual" loooool . So Subaru gets a Dorballom from Illia...whoa wat an addition to a good demon deck...so Rosetta tablet in action registering Will and now the epic duel woooooo . Dafaq Rosetta tablet is screaming when an illegal move is being done..wow wat an awesome thing, so the junior form of Rosetta tablet is the "Kiddy Bench" , nice ! Storm is such a good teacher over here and oh what have we here ? " Protocol NUB" meant for noobish actions..omg ! ( as in one of my favourite online game i happen to come across so many noobs i feel like i should imply the protocol NUB upon those noobs :P) So the duel which is the first duel for Will turns out to b an armored wyvern deck with balesk baj the timeburner as the ultimate finisher and Will in fact managed to use the extra turn ability of it and he was so near in winning it but Balesk Baj was of no match against Illia's Dorballom which left him crippled , unable to recover from its damage and Subaru wins ( like a boss :P). Nevertheless i had great fun reading this duel just like Will had in playing the duel and we have a new challenger for Will in the next and with an exciting new duel tooo.
Thnx for this great chapter.

So we have a nice and long chapter..so after the previous exciting du-al .. i mean 'DUEL" ( :P) all characters r shocked because of u-know-who ..yup it's Dor -door dor ballom (the scariest and the most wicked of all demon commands according to me :P). Now am coming to the Rossetta Tablet , which looks like a cool gadget to me making holograms of creatures and spells and reading the minds of duelists..this tablet is one hell of an object which i would certainly like to use if it exists :P Will just like me is tired and bored of those deadly fighter braid claw battles and certailnly everone will b surprised if they see a mutated giraffe ..lol ! Now we have the D Stadium (wooo) resembling olympic stadiums ( wow ) and it sure has a huge complex attached with it also. Now Will gets a tracking device to track down Ryu or just to follow him and he is quite happy for that and all those cool things that happened in his life which has grown so much intresting in just a few hours , i wish something exciting happens in my dull life :( . Whoa now people tearing up cards , noooo ! Will shocked by tat just like me :O . O my a girl with pink hair now , lovely :P "Red neck", " Mr Neddle Head " loool . And OMMMGGGGG tat pink colours hair girl is NOT A GIRL...so shocking for me.. the next part "FAKE CARDS" ( which i have so many in my posession) and making money i did love to know the art of making money. Dafaq ! did i just read " William Play"...:O (so tats how your new steam id ) "Very , well my dear" ( that's death prophet, lol ) . Dragon lord Ryu ..ooooh Dark Faction is lovely (i love anything in which evil , dark is associtated with like dark magic :P) Well i gree with Ryu with the dragonoids and humans being crap lol. Naturally Ocurring cards, hmm ( i have heard of naturaly occuring minerals only :P) and wat we have here, a green card shining and looking like a little girl resembling an Indian...oooh intresting ! and suddenly i want to know so much about this green little girl and through a marvellous song it came up to b Jasmine,The snow Faerie (must b really cute like a Clefairy :P ). So, i got to know from this chapter tat real cards print outs :P (i always have been a supporter of real cards ). And finally after Jasmine 5 other creature comes up alongside Will :-
"Nemeean!"

"Blaze!"

"Gale!"

"Hangman!"

"Deus!"
Lovely way to end this chapter and now to the next one :D

Another long and awesome chapter.
Haven’t heard from Kurowind for a long time now, seems like one of the ten most wanted has tricks up her sleeves, or in this case, a card hidden in her collar. Wait, she has a metallic left hand? I guess I didn’t notice before.

Illia has a great character, quite distinct, although she is a little harsh at times when facing her comrades namely Ryu, and Will. If she counts them as comrades. Somehow, I thought Illia would laugh a little, but I guess she’s very nice indeed.

And my impression of Robert has not changed from the first time he appeared. I’m sorry, but he is a total weirdo(even though he might be a good duelist) who is obsessed with his unicorn shaped hair, more like a drill upon his head, I’d say.

Hana is a very interesting person as well. She seems quite cold; perhaps she is a little bitter? Quite amazing how she can detect the D-waves from the three (Flora, Uri, and Will). I like the quote you put later in this chapter about how when the flower blossoms, one is surely going down, or something of that sort revealing that she is a boss. The line in between the two bits talking in Hana’s perspective was a little, confusing, since I thought the perspective would change, but alas, the wonderful duel happened. Hana truly smiling is sweet. Her duel with Subaru has much irony, and humor. And what a scene Hana is last seen. Love?

Nova, supernova? Guess that explains how good (maybe) he is.

Edo and Radia seem to become more alike as time goes on. Maybe it’s Subaru’s fault, or it’s the two’s history with Subaru that connects them. That bit of dialogue confused me, (Edo grinned. "That's why you were so Mellow…Beauty is astounding." "Edo." "Yes?" "Radia please punch him for me." "Wha—ooophh…") Edo is also another weirdo, seeking beauties, and a good punching bag.
"Don't listen to him, he is an idiot." "Says the noob." "Yes, you said it, you are the noob." "No you are." "You are." "No, yyyoooouuu are." - Eh, who’s talking? Just a little discombobulating, but after reading a few times, it was a bit clearer.

Blaze talking is always quite fun, even though it is insulting Ryu. Those parts are entertaining to read. Vincen, always being beat up in some way or other by Lala. Lala is so cruel!

Lim is always thinking about onsen, what is up with that guy? So many cards that have hole as their names. What a coincidence.

Need not to know, that sounds quite familiar. You actually have a Yohan? And 8 teams left…intensity and suspense. Luck sure is with Will and Uri.