I love it. It's sweet, simple yet a tender scene. Keep up the good work

It's a cute piece of fluff. A definite W.A.F.F. story.

Awh, what a cute story! :D

I'm not entirely sure about the Ren/Pirika pairing, but I was really in love with how you portrayed Yoh and Anna. Oh! And I looked up Anna's dress on your profile, and its so pretty! If you don't mind me asking, where do you find all the outfits for your stories? It seems like it must take forever to find the perfect one. XP

Love the story! Keep writing! :)

A very pretty piece indeed. There was only one small distracting mistake where you had her instead of his... "...the scent of her fresh perfume invading her senses as he breathed in."

Also I think if I'm the type of person who, if I ever tried to read a Spanish story, the most I would get out of it is "Jalapeño."

Thanks for writing and sharing this story!

Wonderful story. It's a combination of joy and sadness. Sadness because Yoh wasn't around much and joy because he's with the one he loves.

Although Pirika and Ren? :P Weird couple if you ask me. But then again, Jean and Ren pairing even more so. Yet I prefer iron maiden and shark head. :P

I love this story :)