I thought I was soooo clever for realizing it was Emma in like, the first chapter. And then BAM! JJ's crazy.

I applaud you. :)

OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HH! Talk about a twist! Great storytelling! Sad and heartbreaking, but great.

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! This is so intense! You really know how to build suspense, which is awesome!

This last little bit is SO powerful! I wonder who it could be!

Oh my gosh! I dont know why she's running but I hope she's okay!

Oh! What if it's Will's new woman?! I bet it's her!

JJ! Stop being petulant and keep working on this! 50 hours is like, 2 days! That isn't very long!

So sad! JJ you only have a few more hours now to figure things out! Hurry!

I thought there was something creepy about Elle's death! Figure it out, JJ! You can do it!

Oh my gosh! At first when you said he was The Reaper, I thought you meant THE REAPER! I was like, "Run, JJ!" and then I realized...LOL.

So mysterious! Be careful, JJ!

When someone can write so eloquently, no matter the point of view, it makes no difference if it's first or third person. I'm so interested in this!

I really, really like how you wrote this chapter! JJ's completely unaware and the team is so sad. Great job. Can't wait to read more!

Okay, this is so intriguing! I am so excited to read more! Great preface!

There are absolutaly no words to describe how much I love this story. You did absolutaly amazing with everything: the feelings, emotions, OC's, plot and ending. And no, I don't hate you for making JJ crazy. I think that you made a wonderful, unexpected twist to the ending. Terrific work all around! :)