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| The Goddess Of Imaginary Li... 2008-01-26 ch 1, anon. | abuse"Alright, I'll admit it, I'm addicted to Cheez-Itz, they're just so tasty…" I had to laugh at that. Nice writting. ;] |
| tkelly03 2005-07-25 ch 1, | abusegreat stroy, I hope you continue |
| Teri 2005-03-14 ch 1, | abuseSomehow I seemed to miss this one before. Don't know how? Anyway, I especially enjoyed the way MJ confronted him and wouldn't let him talk his way out of revealing himself. Highly enjoyable. Nice work! |
| Sadistic Shadow 2004-07-10 ch 1, | abuseOmfg. That had such an adorably cute ending I think my squeeing little heart shall burst. Either that or I launch into a diabetic coma from all the sugar. |
| The Cure 2004-04-15 ch 1, | abuseso pretty. |
| All Mighty Terrestrial 2003-12-16 ch 1, | abuseHey, great stuff! Not as mushy/angsty as a lot of these type of fics, which is a great change of pace. I laughed out loud at the brief encounter with Terri! Good stuff. |
| CelticArchWing 2002-12-04 ch 1, | abuseWow. O_O I'm speechless. :D ...Maybe not, but HOLY SHIITE that was good! ^ ^ FAVORITES! ^ ^ Even if i'm not the bubbly sort. Muahaha! XD |
| Musogato 2002-05-16 ch 1, | abuseYes, that was indeed a nice story, But what if... remember when Spidey took off his mask? I heard on the news that there are security cameras all over New York, on the streets and everywhere. So I'm thinking, what if one of those cameras caught Spidey's unmasking on tape?? That sure would cause Peter some major problems! Just thought I'd... bring that up. ^_~ Lovely story. |
| 247Lyricism 2002-05-15 ch 1, | abuseAbsolutely wonderful. I loved the line about how everyone needs a hero, and Peter's hero is Mary Jane... touching. I loved this. You're on my favs list. |
| katryna1 2002-05-14 ch 1, | abusewow! this is definetly one of the best spiderman fanfics i've read! great job! are u gonna post another chapter? |
| Merlynne 2002-05-14 ch 1, | abuseCharming, yet subtle interactions. Keep writing. ;) |
| Pip's Sister 2002-05-14 ch 1, | abuseAw, what a nice story. (Even if you spelled Osborn wrong. Please don't do that. It drives me bonkers.) But other than that, very good. I liked Mary Jane's arguments for staying with Peter. Quite convincing, I'd go with her too. Great job! |
| DominoDS 2002-05-13 ch 1, | abuseWow...you did a really awesome job on the fic especially with displaying their emotions. I love it. and thank you for the happy ending :) really good. |
| wepeel 2002-05-13 ch 1, | abusewicked fic. please write more =) |
| Rachel9 2002-05-13 ch 1, | abuseAwwww, how sweet. Hehe, it ended nicely. You characterize MJ and Peter very well, great fic! |