 Bagge 11/26/05 . chapter 1Nice one! Beliable really. Humans are not enemies to be fought, they are children to be protected. Felt quite Asimovian. |
 koolkame 11/18/03 . chapter 1 That's a good one. Makes a lot of sense compared to the body heat line. |
 CanSpy 7/22/03 . chapter 1 Wow. That was really thoughtful. Ever since I saw the Second Renaissance, I wondered the same thing: why did they let us live after all we did. This fic was a really good look at that. |
 bleak reality 5/20/02 . chapter 1Have you read anything by spunkmeyer? The Chronicles of Neo? cause he had exactly the same idea. |
 Tempest 5/19/02 . chapter 1Very interesting. To add a consciousness... an essence, to AI. Well done. |
 Tanathir 5/16/02 . chapter 1"If we had been human, we would have wept." What a powerful line! This is a wonderful perspective...it's nice to see someone writing from the AIs' point of view. Maybe humanity misunderstood its own creation. |
 GeekRyuu 5/14/02 . chapter 1I like this a lot. It's a unique persepective that doesn't get explored all that often. You've also shown the essence of a good villian. A good villian is evil, dastardly, and must be defeated, but they are also well-characterized enough that the reader can sympathize, and even have a sneaking admiration for them. On top that, you're writing is up to its usual excellant standard. You go, girl! |
 Narsus 5/14/02 . chapter 1I do like this. It's morbidly sweet, if there is such a thing. I think it's an ongoing theme: saving humanity from themselves. |
 Aurora Light 5/13/02 . chapter 1A fascinating view point. I have never heard the story told from this perspective before. I very much enjoyed reading this. |