tout ce qu'ils font n'est pas très légal mais ils ne cambriolent pas une banque non plus! l'apparition d'Helen m'a fait craindre le pire et je m'attendais à une entourloupe de sa part, j'aurais été très étonnée (quoique très contente !) que Becker abandonne Helen aux gardes de sécurité, c'est un gentleman ! dommage que cette histoire s'achève c'était amusant de voir évoluer tous ces jeunes personnages dans un cadre différent de Primeval !

à bientôt de vous lire !

l'amitié est quelque chose de magnifique qu'il faut préserver!

à bientôt de vous lire !

La scène entre Jenny et Cutter est très bien , il n'apparait pas que vous avez eu du mal à l'écrire, elle est facile à lire et si mignonne !

j'adore le fait que ce soit Connor qui ait gagné le match de boxe contre Matt !

à bientôt de vous lire !

I'd of liked it better if Helen was blamed for it all but she would have named names so just as well. It's been a lovely little journey and ya done good! Loved all these juvenile delinquents! lol

I absolutely loved this chapter it was fun and had lot action in it and we got lots of Jecker!

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I'm sad that this story has ended because its one of my favourite ff's but it was a great ending!

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So very nicely done. I am sorry to see this one go but I am looking forward to reading Next Gen. I love that you are using kids from the show. I find myself hoping the boys from the ep at the school are going to be there. And DANNY! YAY!

Thanks for the shout out too! Now I'd best go sleep. Work tomorrow. Sigh. Happy Valentines Day!

Thank you for not dragging this out. I'm very pleased that you've let them get over themselves and just see what Helen was trying to do. Boy, is she going to be pissed when she figures out that it didn't work! lol

Even if this is my favourite storyline of this story (Becker and Jess ftw) I loved this chapter!

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And if the next chapter is the last one *cries* then can I cheekily ask for lots or at least a bit of Jecker? Probably kissing?

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Update soon!

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Since I didn't get to review chapter 16 back when I've read it, I just want to say I loved both 16 and 17, particularly 17. You did an excellent job with Stephen and Nick's mending fences. I love their friendship!

Aw I love Stephen/Cutter moments. They r so cute. Please update soon. And make Helen leave. Please.

I liked this! Loved Cutter/Jenny, you did a good job with them. I was pleased that she stood up for herself. Also loved the wrestling match! Emily cheating and obviously, Connor winning. .what fun. And as long as you're going to have a reconciliation with Cutter and Stephen, I shall continue to read. Good work!

Aww the Nick and Jenny was lovely!

And I loved Connor beating Matt at the end. And Emily was brilliant! :D

More soon please!

Great job and I loved the Cutter/Jenny scene :) It was really well written

Yay! And please say no Stephen die in this story! Please!

I love this the Cutter/Jenny worked great and the second half was great too update soon!

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