A very promising beginning! Please do continue this fic, as I'm really very curious as to what's to happen next. And yes, it most definitely is considered to have a plot...

YES this is a plot! what happens next?

Definitely continue!Do you take challenges from other people?

of course you should continue! It is really really really really good!

Hahaha! I love it! It's great. Please continue! .

yes you should...it's funny. :P

*Britt*

Yesyesyesyesyes! Continue! Poor Shiara. I've gotten my hair dyed with purple streaks before and everyone was staring at me. How odd.

please continue, i'm interested

yes, you should. this is a good fic so far, and has quite a bit of potential.

Please continue. I really liked it. Youuse correct grammar and know how to spell, or at least use a spell checker. This is very is a very nice change from what I usually run into. So please continue. And yes that is a plot...a horrendously unfinished one.

Definately continue; it is a rare authors who knows where to put her apostrophes... i really enjoyed this, especially the silliness.

Of course continue it! Anything with Daystar and Shiara in it is good!

Question (for any1 who wants to answer it)

Uh did any1 else notice that you know, Day star was named for the sun? you know like Day Star... oh and you know, sun/son as in Mendanbar's son?

Just a question...

But anyway. This is a great story.

Please continue

-Becca

This is really nice, I hope you could continue it...I love it...

I must say, I LOVE YOUR STORIES! _ You've got the original writing style and you've got the characters true! Please make more. _

Continue! This is a good story.