really funny and punny too! You have a nice way with humorous stories. Hope you'll write more of them!

LOL! Nice work on accentuating the humorous side of the series with this short piece. I have read your first chapter of the new story and I understand already why you decided to make this fun scene as a for sharing!

A good short scene you've written here - I enjoyed it very much. It's always good to see the guys having a light relaxing moment where they can joke around.

Thanks for sharing this and I look forward to your other story whenever you post it.

Ash.