 Vampyric Ninja 4/8/12 . chapter 1D'aww, very sweet. I'm very impressed at how you managed to jam so many characters into this fic and still have it flow so well! :D I love the little touches - having L'Arachel join Moulder with the sermon, Lute and Artur's magic storytelling, sourpuss Innes, Neimi and Colm always close to each other, etc Excellent job! |
 wolfraven80 1/29/12 . chapter 1I enjoyed this piece. I like how it moved from one set of characters to the next in a sort of chain reaction of events, and the fun, lighthearted tone was really nice. The hints of other ships–-Seth/Eirika, Kyle/Syrene, etc.–-were a cute touch as well. :) |
 Agent Beetle 1/22/12 . chapter 1hilarious and great characters. the thing with fire emblem games is they don't have exact characters so fanficer have to make them up more or less and if i had to do so it would have been a rougher image of what you did good job really |
 Kazuya RandomAuthor 1/20/12 . chapter 1Hahaha I love this! I could really imagine something like this happen somewhere in the game timeline. X3
Kazuya |
 Aquatic-Idealist 1/19/12 . chapter 1Heh, who would have thought she'd be so devious? You were able to stuff so many characters into the fic and keep them believable (that is, none of them seem out of character), kudos! |