(0o0) An interesting story. I like how you wrote it. Very misterious and well thought.

I think you wrote a very good story for others to contemplate. (0o0)

That was...terrifying. But I really liked it. You did a really good job.

I hear it coz I'm listening to it on youtube this is freaky I read 2 paragraphs and I imediately freaked out and stopped reading but considering this was meant to be freaky you did great. :D CONGRAGULATION

Wow! I think you nailed this one! Ever since hearing this song as a kid, it spellbounded me. The words of Death are interesting; and after every paragraph, you could almost hear Sarah's voice on the wind. Just captivating! Good job!

I know you said you weren't too happy with this piece, but I think it's actually quite lovely. You did a wonderful job making it the voice somewhat archaic, but still accessible, and I love the imagery throughout the whole work. There are a couple places where I feel your word choice could be improved and the structure tightened up just a bit, but overall, this is very nice. Thank you.

Interesting fic, I love the song too. :)