|Reviews for Come Little Children|
| fish-egirl 3/15/13 . chapter 1
(0o0) An interesting story. I like how you wrote it. Very misterious and well thought.
I think you wrote a very good story for others to contemplate. (0o0)
| ViCtOrIoUsGaL41822 10/21/12 . chapter 1
That was...terrifying. But I really liked it. You did a really good job.
| Rocky Pond 9/4/12 . chapter 1
I hear it coz I'm listening to it on youtube this is freaky I read 2 paragraphs and I imediately freaked out and stopped reading but considering this was meant to be freaky you did great. :D CONGRAGULATION
| Jeremy 6/18/12 . chapter 1
Wow! I think you nailed this one! Ever since hearing this song as a kid, it spellbounded me. The words of Death are interesting; and after every paragraph, you could almost hear Sarah's voice on the wind. Just captivating! Good job!
| UmbriFiica 1/26/12 . chapter 1
I know you said you weren't too happy with this piece, but I think it's actually quite lovely. You did a wonderful job making it the voice somewhat archaic, but still accessible, and I love the imagery throughout the whole work. There are a couple places where I feel your word choice could be improved and the structure tightened up just a bit, but overall, this is very nice. Thank you.
| FirePony16 1/21/12 . chapter 1
Interesting fic, I love the song too. :)