this is an amazing story, but i've noticed that it hasnt been updated in some time now. Please tell me you are not trashing this, i truely wish to read more.

best wishes. Mist

Wonderful chapter! I really liked how Barry went from pissed at what Bruce did to understanding that Bruce has legitimate fears of being outed. Yes, Bats can be a dick sometimes and Barry had every reason to be angry, but I think it's a good character moment to show Barry's insight into Bruce's motivations. I also thought that it was in-character for Hal to still be upset at Bruce on Barry's behalf- very Hal Jordan.

Nice writing as usual!

Okay, Bats is paranoid, but...a national security risk? And no reason given? Sounds a mite overkill, there. I'd have thought he'd have just bugged their phones, the house, workplaces...

Wow, I didn't think Bruce would go that far. He's paranoid yes, but I didn't think he would ruin people's lives like that. Though, I guess I can see why he did it (it was nice to have Barry explain).

I'm really looking forward to what happens next. I wonder how unpleasant it's going to be for Wally to work with Malcolm... And I know this story is mainly about Barry and Iris, but is it wrong to hope that we'll see some best friend interaction with Dick and Wally? They may not know each other at the moment, but Dick could drop by STAR labs right? It's a thought. But whatever you decide to write, I'll be sure to read it. Until next time!

Okay let me just say my pin name was chafed by my sister as a joke. So yeah anyways...

I really like this story! (I feel like I start each Reveiw or this story like that). I really like how you referred to Oliver or how Hal thought about him! I don't know why but Barry, Hal and Oliver crack me up! And Thawne (when you used him I made the connection to Zoom not Barry's twin lol well played :)) as Wally's supervisor was just well I think it was a great Idea!

I hope you update soon!

Great chapter upload moar soon :D

Cool

Hmm...seems to me this are heating up. I like your writing.

Keep up the awesome,

Retta :D

Wow this story is really well written and intresting, its a nice break from all the smutty Flash fics and I love how its about Barry and not just about Wally, dont get me wrong I love me some Wally but reading about another speedster isjust so refreshing. I hope to continue reading this for a while :D

Good work and writing so far.

I will have to catch-up on this story at a later time, however, because, unfortunately, I'm behind on my own FanFiction. ...But, rest assured, that I will finish this great story.

There were a few grammatical and syntactical errors here and there, but it was never so much that it detracted from the flow of the story.

I enjoy your concise and clear writing style. It gets the point across, without to much overhang.

Keep up the good work

Dont worry barry! you two r soulmates so run along, get married, make wally your kid flash, and get working so bart will be created

Wow, a background check? Somehow, I'm not surprised... Weird. I do find it surprising that Bruce had such a problem with it. I mean, I understand the whole secret identity thing, but still. And when it comes to revealing secret IDs, I always saw Bruce caving first, at least to women he's come to care for (what other superhero's weakness is matters of the heart?).

I'm just waiting for the chapter when Barry finally cracks. Or maybe Wally finds out first; wouldn't that be interesting? In any case, I can't wait for the next chapter!

Thinking on this, I'm kind of surprised that Batman never covered his mouth area. (He does in Batman Beyond though.) Well, Batman never smiles so I guess his teeth wouldn't give him away. ;P

Hal and Barry need a cover story.

"We're friends with benefits?" Barry gave him a look that made Hal cringe inside. "Okay, bad idea. How about we shared the same taste in girlfriends only I beat you to Carol, but it was all good?" A similar look. "Yeah, maybe not."

I love you for writing this story. It is really well done and I wait eagerly for the next chapter.

Another really good chapter! I can't wait for your next chapter! :)