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Deepdream 2008-01-15 ch 10,	abuseHehe...^^° Im kinda late, ain't I? Okay, that question was dumb even for me - and that certainly means a lot. However, it's only luck that I've came across this masterpiece and I loved every sentence of it. It's simply great the way it's written. That you've turned Mousse into "The White Spider" instead of Ryoga or Ranma really rocks because it gets kinda irritating seeing Ranma become the one and only in every fanfiction out there. Therefore it is quite a change to see our - formerly - blind martial artist get a power boost and a very nice sidekick to boot! Are you planning on turning Shampoo into that cat character from Spiderman? If you do I'd happily abide this decision. And to make Genma the big badass seems like a sound idea to me - especially because you make him seem even more human by turning him into a monster, you know? Okay, that makes absolutely no sense at all but I guess you know what I'm getting at. Now, it only worries me that around five to six years have passed since the last update thus I'm inclined to think that you won't write another chapter - which's quite the shame! Hopefully you're going to read this review and just maybe decide to spend one hour or two in order to write chapter 11. I'd be looking forward to it, I asure you. Farewell, Deepdream
DarkAni 2002-07-15 ch 10, anon.	abuseI read it a second time, and I love it even more! Keep going! The fic's great!
Sakata Ri Houjun 2002-06-09 ch 10,	abuseHey, I'be been reading this since the beginning, and I think you are doing such a superb job here. Don't quit just because no one's reviewing. If that was the case, I'd stop on some of my stories as well because I don't nearly as many reviews as I'd like to. But honestly, I love it, especailly how you're developing Mousse's persona as a superhero.
Jaid Skywalker 2002-05-30 ch 10,	abuseHey great job! Sorry about not reviewing; had a virus and couldn't get on the computer for a while. I can't wait for more; you are doing a really great job. And I'm glad Shampoo's hair is red; I love red hair. ^___^ Continue!
badgerwolf 2002-05-27 ch 10, anon.	abuseIntriguing. You're very clever at mixing all the various worlds together, and I like the characterization you've got going on. Keep up the excellent work on this fic!
DarkAni 2002-05-26 ch 10, anon.	abuseWell done. I can understand it would be hard to make Shampoo be a D.I.D., considering how she was the champion of her village. The only criticism is that you should describe the Green Panda's costume more, otherwise I enjoyed it, especially when Mousse quoted spider-an around the end!
Zsych 2002-05-26 ch 10,	abuseHmm.. interesting.. sorta. More action and carnage was needed. IMO Genma is a long way above Mousse. And if he could develop his forbidden techniques, then he can develop a lot worse, without his self-limitations. I think that it would be unreasonable to actually have Mousse defeat Genma, without a few more years of training at the very least. Also it might be a good idea, to turn Genma into a respectable baddie(instead of just copying the plot from the movie). After all Spiderman, usually has lots of opponents(in the comics and cartoons). maybe if you merge Genma's two personas you can turn out someone like Geese Howard. Evil, and sorta honorable... ok maybe not all that honorable, but atleast, not a total psycho. Again, i think that Ranma should be able to reach Spider-Mousse's level... eventually. He is after all much more talented. Ofcourse, now with the promise, it's gonna take some serious reasons to do so. Again, a case of several years. Add X-Men, and something to this story, and well... not that normal spiderman even is lacking in baddies. Might be fun, to see a meeting of two spidermen(don't use the movie runt). Well, anyway, hope more comes out soon, and that the writing is also fun. Take Care
BlazeStryker 2002-05-26 ch 10,	abuseNice, very nice, but he would have used White Spider, lest the news carry this over and woory the New York Spidey (Muu Tsu is that considerate, even without knowing of that whole clone business!) There's a horrible truth in this next one: Nodoka is in great peril, the insanity and craven horror that now possesses Genma is the same hate and fear that had him avoiding his wife. Think about it.
DarkAni 2002-05-24 ch 9, anon.	abuseI don't have alot of time, so I'll make it quick. The fight was well-handled, Ranma's finally growing up. Red-head shampoo? I can imagine that. Yay! Can't wait for the next part!
DarkAni 2002-05-23 ch 8, anon.	abuseShampoo's haircolor? I guess black like it was in the manga. Great chapter! Can't wait for more Green Panda action!, and the first "real" appearance of White Spider!
Jaid Skywalker 2002-05-22 ch 7,	abuseI seriously can not wait for the next chapter! I love this story. Keep up the good work! By the way, are you every going to finish your Fight Club story? And I think the White Spider is okay...still not as good as Spiderman, but oh well. ^__^
BlazeStryker 2002-05-22 ch 7,	abuseI just hope Second Impact doesn't come off, as let's face it, Muu Tsu flat don't need EVA on his conscience, having to kill Genma in the not-so-distant future will do it nicely.. and just to add, if you do a second Goblin, There's already a green-auraed soul, about to tumble into the dark. Ryouga. I'll let you figure out what to insult me for thinking here, or take from this simple idea. Thanks again, you're awesome.
Ranma Bushiko 2002-05-22 ch 7, anon.	abuseYou mentioned a fight with Muu Tsu against Ranma in an earlier chapter. Why not have Ranma end up spotting the Kaio Ken technique on the tv as Goku does it in the Saiya-jin/Saiyan saga, and him figure out how to do it? That, though it would be a bit of a DBZ crossover, would send him to Muu Tsu's skill/strength, and give him a bigger fight than ever before. Plus it would be more action packed if Ranma were to be actually able to stop Muu Tsu cold sometimes. On the other hand, the story's going well as it already is. Keep it up, and at least think of what I suggested for a good plot idea(maybe after Genma's death if it happens, he starts hunting Spiderman after learning the Kaio Ken?).
DarkAni 2002-05-22 ch 7, anon.	abuseI agree with the name "White Spider". Good update! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Ryo-Wolf 2002-05-19 ch 6,	abuseThis is a very fine Fanfic, I hope you write more. As for what others have said. Ranma-Chan as Spider-Girl: It WOULD be hillarious for this to occur, or something simular. A spider-man vs. Spider-woman mid-air combat scene would be insanely cool. Ryoga as Venom: No! you can't have this! This is my idea!!! MINE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MWAHAAHAHAHAHA!!!! ahem actually, I'm planning on making a spider-man/Ranma cross over myself. (Ranma won't be spidey, too obvious.) And I've already decided that once venom makes his appearance, Ryoga will have that roll. If you decide to do it, be my guest, I'm just telling you I'm doing the same thing. Green Panda: The whole thing with throwing explosive riceballs and riding a glider shaped like a sign? GO FOR IT!!! The Lizard: If you plan on making the lizard, the best bet (now that tofu is dead) would be Kodachi. after all, she's always screwing around with chemicals and she does have that pet alagator to use as the basis of the experiment. Doctor Octopus: HAPPOSAI! HAPPOSAI!! HAPPOSAI!!! If you don't, I will. Vulture: Kuno, the only one stupid enough to make fake bird wings and attempt to fly with them. (Wile E. Coyote, heh heh.) Rhino: Who knows? Hiroshi??? Well whatever, its your fic, do with it what you wish.

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