|Reviews for Archive Rejects|
| Koroby 4/10/13 . chapter 8
Harry Potter and HMDK crossover? Any chance of you forwarding a list of people who took up this story?
| The 17th Immortal 4/10/13 . chapter 35
Interesting premise. About the only thing I would complain about is the attempted Japanese – "Sphere of the Sun" should be either "Taiyougan" or else "Taiyoudama"; Taiyouken is more like "Fist of the Sun".
Perhaps the Sage himself could have been an Assassin?
| Fiori75 4/2/13 . chapter 34
Brother, if you do nothing else, you have to do this one. the sheer potential for it is epic. Especially since you can keep their personalities exactly the same. Most people seem to like changing personalities and then power set. But in this you can show how having actual ability can change a person the challenge of it as a writer is vast but come on tell me it doesn't just pique your interest s more than a one shot? Hell you could even be one of the few people that write a redeemed Kabuto! Think of the challenge!
| Thozmp Corris 3/5/13 . chapter 32
So would Yusuke help train Tsukune, at least as far as surviving the academy goes? Could Tsukune even learn? What would the cast's reaction be to learning that Yusuke is S-class himself? Does the Safety Committee know what Yusuke is, or who he is the descendant of?
Still would like to see Yusuke's reaction to the head of the Safety Committee (can't remember his name).
| The 17th Immortal 3/5/13 . chapter 32
Interesting premise, although I'd prefer it if it was still Tsukune that Moka was attracted to, blood-wise – AFAIK, it's BECAUSE Tsukune is pure-human, is what makes his blood so "delicious". Yusuke's blood would certainly be "exotic", I agree, but I can't really see that translate into Moka developing a crush on him.
Besides, all throughout the entire series, Yusuke's never once been anything BUT completely 100% faithful to Keiko – any attempt on Moka's part to get into a relationship with him would be doomed from the start.
| ArmorOfGeddon 3/5/13 . chapter 32
Yeah, I can see why this really only works as a snippet (and even the snippet wasn't that interesting). There isn't anything in RV that Yusuke can't curbstomp, even limiting his strength to Dark Tournament levels (save Alucard, and Yusuke's real srength should be sufficient for that threat). Yusuke wouldn't cheat on Keiko so no romance on his end either.
The whole fic would just be Tsukune's regular adventures and harem antics with Yuusuke there to beat down the bad guy on the rare occasions they need his help. Though, it'd be hilarious to see Yuusuke beating down the the Headmaster for luring Tsukune into danger like that and then leaving him high and dry.
| Guest 3/5/13 . chapter 32
Great idea here, although it could use some refinement. I'm sad to see that you've added this one to the rejects archive...
| Guest 2/27/13 . chapter 31
| Swords and Roses 2/23/13 . chapter 30
Interesting...My favorites are Knight of Duel (Gundam Seed), Tennin (Naruto), XIII: The Conspiracy (Harry Potter), Harry Potter and Assassin's Creed, Yomi no Kage (Kenichi the Strongest Disciple), Anakin's Creed (Star Wars), and The Balance (Harry Potter/Assassin's Creed).
Are there anyone who has taken any of the stories in this archive? I want to read them since all of these ideas seem interesting and most seem well thought out.
| The 17th Immortal 2/5/13 . chapter 30
I take it the reason you're also excluding Ron from the group, is because of how... determinedly lazy he is, especially in the head?
And please don't tell me it's Dumbledore who's the Templar-Wizards Grand Master – "greater good" or not, that would just be cliché! (Not to mention somewhat contradictory to Wormtail being a TRIPLE agent, come to think of it.)
| SomeGuyFawkes 1/26/13 . chapter 29
You forgot that Jar Jar was killed, early on, by a falling chunk of "blue ice" and was never heard from at all.
| SulliMike23 1/26/13 . chapter 29
Now this idea I see a lot of potential in. If Anakin followed THIS creed of the Jedi, then the events leading up to the original trilogy would've been different.
| Hinatafanboy 1/22/13 . chapter 28
I always liked Renka and hoped she would have a bigger portion in the story.
| Kal-NayahC 1/13/13 . chapter 28
It's a pity you aren't interested in continuing any of your HSDK stories as there is a surprisingly few good fics available.
| ranma hibiki 12/15/12 . chapter 26
now THIS is a story worth writing out! D
how would harry explain his finger being cut off? that the assassins have been known to do for their weapon of choice