Very good

i liked this. it was short and sweet, or should i say sad? either way it was good. :)

If you're going to write in fragment sentences, you should probably use script form.

sad

this is supid

Good, sweet, nice, and very, very short. With a little more fleshing out this could be much better, but it's also very good the way it is. Good job.

oh, thats so sad, it was good, write more like it!