Love!

You updated! I like it :) Please update soon..

You updated! :D Yay I'm so glad to see you post a new chapter, and it was really really good besides a few minor grammatical errors. Update soon! :)

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Anyway, I like the idea, but it needs more... like when you read a book from the school library, it engages you, and has more detail. Overall, I think that the writing is amatuerish, and needs more 'WOW' factor. I give this a 3/10 because the ideas are there, but it needs more.

Now, I'm going to say that I will redo all the chapters, and have at least 10 more chapters done by the end of the school year. Sorry to those that thought it was perfect, I just need it to fit my standards. I guess we'll call this survey 1.

I liked it. It was a little short, but I cant complain, since my chapters are always short. It was really good, please update soon!

Ok so I totally love this, the whole idea and everything. And you did improve on the detail, for which I am happy, but you still leave enough questions to keep the hook. Update soon please! :)

Oooo this will be good. Check out my story Witch Hunters, too please.

This is really good, please update soon.

Btw, it's me, from school.

Ok so this sounds like a really awesome story idea and of course I love your descriptions of the razor and car. My only complaint is more detail and (just a suggestion) try doing a series of symbols between paragraphs that take place in different time periods, like the first and second one. But awesome story, you know I love your writing, please continue.