This story is amazing!I am glad that I read it all the way though!I will most likely reread this story as well as The sands Of are both amazing story's and I wish you both to keep writing amazing story's!Oh and BTW there is FINALLY a deltora quest read the book story!I have been waiting for that for two years!(no lie.)

I have read all the new chapters and love how you ended it. There was only one mistake I could see and that was when you used 'too' instead of 'two'.

'I love you too' is what you used. it would have been OK if one of his parents had said 'I love you' before that.

This fic over all was very good. A bit fast is some places but still good. )

Hey I just have a question here. Are you going to be writing the rest of the series with morio or are you going to stop after this one?

It's a bit fast but other than that it's fine. I haven't seen any spelling, grammar or punctuation mistakes that weren't meant to be there. Well done. )

I have to say that I am in love with this story. It's hard to find a good Deltora quest story that actually follows the books or anime. I wish you luck in writing

I LOVE THIS STORY IT'S MY FAVOURITE DELTORA QUEST FANFICTION! I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER. I LOVE HOW THERE'S LIEFxJASMINE STUFF IN HERE. AND I LOVE HOW U MADE LIEF JELUSE OF DAIN! I was wondering if they r actully going to rescue Lief before the the huge battle? I
really hope they do. Thanks!
LiefxJasmine FOREVER!

I am willing to Beta if you still need one.

Yeah Josie i was thinking the same thing
please write more i want to see what happen next
good luck with the next chapter!
-Black Mizt

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE MORE! It's a really great story and i want to know more!

SPOILER ALERT I think Morio is really prince Lief 'fell from the the sky' lief was thrown out of a window.

i love the story i hope you write more but one question why is Lief's name Morio i don't get it.

i really love your story please please write more