| Reviews for Our Burning World |
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Guest 11/24/12 . chapter 14 How in the world did this get 35 reviews and a couple of faves?! This is my FAVE story and I read it a couple months back :-/ |
Nikikeya 4/27/12 . chapter 1This is a really awesome story best I've ever read so far. Though I'm sad that it ended so soon. I tried to look for the sequel, is it "Taking Chances"? Anyways, great story, I wish you'd write more "During the series stories". I've added Our Burning World to my favorites. |
PepTalkGurl101 2/11/12 . chapter 13i think 1 ore chapter could be good then the sequel but again it all depends where u take it |
Claire Cooper 2/11/12 . chapter 13Short chapter or not you put a lot of work into your chapters regardless on how short or long they are. I can hear the stress radiating off of Aang and I am not sure what he could do he's still not really acting completely like himself. |
PepTalkGurl101 2/4/12 . chapter 12This chapter seemed a little rushed, which i better you know but then again how the heck are you suppose to make it long? So all in all Good Job! Bueno trabaja! lol i think thts how you spell work in spanish. Poor Aang/Kuzon :( |
Claire Cooper 2/4/12 . chapter 12Poor Aang even though he still isn't fully back when he gets back in completely control of himself he's going to fall apart because we all know Aang isn't the type to kill no matter how bad things get and the fact that he did will eat away at him. Also this chapter is shorter then most of your usual's but I guess your just busy so good work just the same. |
Claire Cooper 2/1/12 . chapter 11Well I must say Katara has a way with words.. well not so much words but she is very persuasive is she not xD. I love Ty Lee so peppy her and Mai make pretty good friends total opposites but that is whats fun about them xD |
Beatles-Kataang 2/1/12 . chapter 11NAPLAN! Don't worry about it, it's a piece of cake. It's good to see Aang getting back to normal and a bit of progress with him and Katara. |
Lmb111514 1/29/12 . chapter 10This was great it wasn't the worst, in fact none of these are the worst, they are all absolutely amazing, can't wait for the next chapter! |
Claire Cooper 1/29/12 . chapter 10Lol You just couldn't stop yourself from adding the banana juice comment could you xD. Anyway its good that Aang learned to master the avatar state but he still seems to be having trouble with all his other elements which can be a big problem of course naturally xD I feel so stupid when I state the obvious anyway sorry good work can't wait to see the next chapter. |
S k i n n e y L o v e 1/28/12 . chapter 10I like the story so far, but... Will Aang ever return to Aang? Like fully? |
Claire Cooper 1/28/12 . chapter 9Poor Aang I kinda feel for him I mean if i were in that place where I only knew two people i trusted and the rest claimed to know everything about me. I think I too would feel really uncomfortable and unsure with myself. Im sure he will get them back eventually though sadly he hasn't much time left though. |
PepTalkGurl101 1/28/12 . chapter 9That was the perfect ending! I can't wait for more, and I feel so bad for Aang! I can easily see Ty Lee and Katara as friends, so i cant wait for more on their friendship! |
Lmb111514 1/28/12 . chapter 9This was absolutely amazing, I lobed how he remembered Appa and the whole Aura thing with Ty Lee, can't wait to see what he remembers next! |
A7XfoREVer 1/27/12 . chapter 8Yes! This is an amazing story it's definatley one of the best on here |