There's not enough shiznat here! they should be together already! Takeda is annoying and shizurus dad is obnoxious. Please update :) good plot but less drama more shiznat please! ;)

I hope that u will update again...

Interesting , can't wait for the next chap

wow. interesting! plz keep writing, id like to read more.

Perfect! I reallly like your story! Pretty awesome, and you haven't rushed anything! I really love how you are developing their relationship. I'm happy that I found your story! It's awesome, keep the good work

Your story doesn't seem rushed, but the phrasing is very awkward in places.
It's still a good story, though; I hope the next chapter comes sooner than it took for this last (hint, hint)... ;)

Seems to be going at a regular pace no worries :P.

not leave it very interesting

I hope not to be too long to upload the next chapter XD

regards

wow! amazing chapter! thanks for the update:)

woohoo! shiznat progress! thanks for the update

No it wasn't rushed or unnatural. Everything sounded fine to me. I can't wait for the next chapter.

When natsuki saw her bike I was like Oh sugar honey iced tea its about to go down lol.

And what was that with shizuru, her mom sounded crazy to me?

PS shizuru's dad is a b hole. Yes I mean b hole. As in b for butt you fill in the rest:)

This was good! I didn't find anything out of line. I'm surprised at shiz's parent's behavior...her mom was mean! And father too controlling. Apparently they didn't know shiz is a les...hmm how will shiznat work out if her parents are sooo bad?

I won't nat does get revenge for her bike!

very nice

Ooh. Can't wait for le ShizNat. And hope thar Natsuki beats the crap out of takeda for messing with her ducati.

Brilliant it is put very interesting, it is my imagination or shizuru it continues loving haha, I wait for it the continuation and greetings.

I like much the chapter

:)