YOU MUST CONTINUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE E

This is such a brilliant story! I love the way the characters interact with each other and I really like the way you've portrayed Alfred, he's so sweet! Please update soon, I'm dying to know what happens next and to meet Alfred's family!

Need more more more owo!

HIS FATHER?!

HOLY SHIT A PLOT TWIST.

I LOVE THIS STORY ALMOST AS MUCH AS I LOVE MY SLINKY! 8D

I knew it, Alfred's father is alive, I've always imagined him as a person who would say someone close to him died... :3

This was such a good chapter! I love how we get to see them growing and changing I really can't wait until Arthur reveals himself as Princess Anyways, update soon! 3

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH WHY IS EVERYTHING YOU WRITE SO PERFECT

I CANNOT EVEN START TO DESCRIBE IT ALL ;A; 3 you're so very talented oh my!

i can't wait for the next chapter and wow this is just perfect, PERFECT :D keep up the good work, im sure you can, you awesome you!

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wow this story, just... fjkgnjfk this is EVERYTHING i could've asked for! i've been looking for ages for somethign as perfect as this, and here it is!

i cannot describe just everything i love about it and wow your english... you said you're not native, and I know how it feels because i also write fanfics but am not native either, but just... jfdngkjgf some words you use! the sentences! the grammar! i am amazed, you're even better than many, many native writers i've come past the last couple of months, so hereby i compliment you on your awesome skills!

and it's not just the language that's awesome, so is the character devlopment, situations happening, writing style, and well thought-out OCs. i normally don't like OCs very much, but yours don't even bother me! i actually like them! this is just wonderful and I can't wait for more! every word, every sentece, everything is perfect and i couldn't have asked for anything better!

keep up the good work! i love it!

amazing love details u put into their interactions cant wait for new uupdate

I stayed up until five in the morning reading this. FIVE IN THE MORNING.

This story is awesome, it's cute, well-written, and jeez PLEASE UPDATE.

I really can't wait for more! I'm favoriting and subscribing!

What a great story! The characters are lively, the storyline is entertaining and your style is fun. Plus you’ve got some very interesting plot points.

First of all, the dream sequence. It was rather prophetic, wasn’t it? Meaning that there is something seriously wrong with Arthur’s future. But what’s most startling is the appearance of the key. To pull a solid object out of a dream is undeniably bizarre. This reeks of magic, so perhaps the fey are involved? But why would such an item be so crucial that it must be given to him in such a remarkable manner? Perhaps the fairies were trying to prepare him for a possible opportunity and realized that forewarning was necessary. It would have to be of great importance to his future, perhaps even the kingdom, if they would go to such lengths. Something’s afoot, that’s for sure. The plot thickens!

Now as for relationships, Alfred’s outburst was very telling as to his ideas on their acquaintance -If the hugs and kisses weren’t already enough of a clue. It appears that Alfred was smitten as soon as he saw the sparkle of tears in Arthur’s eyes, as they still sincerely trouble him. I wonder when the young princess will realize the depths of his best friend’s feelings for him. And from Arthur’s own thoughts and actions, I also have to wonder when he will discover the level of his own regard for the captain’s son.

Things are definitely heating up and I can’t wait for more! Please update soon!

Ah, uh, ooooouuuhhh... QAQ

I really curious about the things will happen next, Oh... Please update fast! xD

Hey, you come back! Yey! . I realy missed this story, so I am so happy! Pleas, post soon you can!

I can't decide if Alfred's clingy-ness is a good thing, or a bad thing... He's obviously feeling something for Arthur... possessiveness! :O And the dream thing was cool! I do wonder what it was trying to tell Arthur, though

I really loved this chapter! Please do update soon! :3

Hi there! This is a good chapter. I am quite curious about Arthur s dream and the key. Alfred s expression is strange. What happened to him? What will happen to both Alfred and Arthur in the future when Al suddenly changed? So, waiting for your next update.

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