hope u write more of this, sounds rly gd so far. loved the every1 needs an off switch bit, would make life so much easier. _

Oh! This was *great*! You must continue! Please? Pretty please?

This... story... -rocks-! I wish I could write like that... You have a wonderful way of portraying all of them, very true to their characters. The Rinoa/Squall interaction is priceless, and the idea of having two Squalls is -ingenious-! Please, please, please continue soon, I would love to know how you'll handle the two, and if Squall's psyche will be able to handle it

please write more this is a really good story

This is really an extraordinary piece. It displays a commendable understanding of the FFVIII world, as well as original concepts blended in with astonishing result. The style is smooth and easy to read, and the exposition is incredible. You MUST finish this fic. Please?

geez, it took me forever to log in. i think u should accept anonymous reviews, becuz u would get alot more reviews. anyway, u made rinoa into a whiny, clingy bitch and i can totally feel squall's pain. poor guy. rinoa's my fave character, but i don't mind a little bashing once in a while. i feel really sorry for squall, continue soon.

2 Squalls? Very original! Continue!