*sniffles*...please continue...please, please, please continue...*sniffles again*

You just gotta continue with this story...you just can't leave it hanging like that...I want to know what is going to happen next...please update soon, pretty please (_)

aw, c'mon, you're not leaving it there? write more! what's up with evil rinoa? will they save seifer? will squall get his memory back? why's he carrying his gunblade if he's a recently released amnesiac? write more!

GREAT! KEEEP WRITING!

Wow! What a cliffhanger! Can't wait to see what happens next! Wonder what Rinoa did to Squall during Time Compression? I just KNOW she's behind it-I never did trust that girl.

Rinoa did something to Squall... no doubt about it. But if we all say that Rinoa is giving him amnesia, will you change it to shock and confuse us?

and...we're waiting! Well, you're awful nice, leaving us standing on th edge of an 180ft drop- off cliff. Keep writing...I'll keep 0.0's on this!

WOW can’t wait for the next part,

Keep up the good work.

Loved the Squinoa bit ;)

Great start and nice cliffhanger. As usual, please write more.

nice, so far. It looks like Rinoa mite have done something to Squall with her powers.

But a cheerful Squall? Thats just creepy.

Sure it's nice when he has his moments when he lets go, but come on. THe guy's just not meant to be so casual all the time. :)

Uuuuuuuuuuuuuuu...! Spooky! A bratty-bitchy-good-for-nothing-Rinoa clinging to Squall as if her life depended on it, the interaction between the gang (specially Quistis and Zell), a familiar shout, an even more familiar gunblade and then the world explodes to fire... (geez, I wonder who that is...) This is story is SO great! I want to know what's coming next! Really! This is awfully interersting and I'm cliff-haging over it! Please continue! _