I enjoyed this a lot:) great work!

I feel bad for Ramesses..I mean, he did the wrong thing but..well, you know..he loved Shani. I think you have the best story on here in the POE section!

Interesting chapter..

I wonder why the guards would ignore the princess? interesting chapter off to read more!

I really like this! It's awesome and awesomely written!

Amazing!

Good story! I really liked it! Although I do feel bad for Ramses! I love you take on everything. Keep writing! ]

I feel sorry for Rameses. He could'nt kill Zehira and now he is completely alone.

He lost all his family.

Moses's family is happy and full of joy and, of course, they thought about Rameses sometimes, /irony on/ they are very good people. /irony off/

And Zehira "it is hard to forget everything".

I am interested what she must forget...

Yes, I know, I know - this all horrible, disgusting lie her life.

Nevermind. I like Your way in describing Rameses.

Thank You very much!

P.S. One thing is completely unbelieveable - this guard hitting princess Shani in her face. I think You should corect it, but I am not sure, this is Your story...

I love the ending. If it's too much to ask, can you do another one but this time Moses as a twin and both grew up in Egypt and use the same movie story?

What a happy ending!

:D

This is getting good!

Keep up the good work!

:D

It's okay about the wait, but the story is getting really good!

:)

It's about time you've updated. Just kidding. It's me. Your first reviewer ever. Anyway, great chapter. Update ASAP please. :)

i love this plz continue

:( My name of being your only reviewer is no more. I really liked being your only reviewer, but I shall not be shellfish. Anyway back to the story, I can't believe Shani knows now. This is epic. Please update ASAP! :)