Wow, you are fantastic at writing dialog. I am LOVING the banter! Please keep up the good work!

This was hilarious! I loved Maddys boob scar!

The banter between Mark and Maddy was well written and a lot of fun.

Great work!

Nice story

Amazing! I absolutely loved it! I was laughing and grinning from the moment it started to the moment it ended. Something wonderfully amusing about Maddy getting trashed and stripping on a coffee table...anyway it was funny and cute and it gave me a much needed laugh. Nice work!

loved it! I love them together. You did a really good job. thanks