A nice ending! So much about our guys was never really explored in the cannon which leaves a lot to the imagination.

You did well with the emotions, behaviors, etc with each character it made it easy to follow.

I have been waiting and waiting for this update! I am so amazed at your writing. This was wonderful! I'm glad you ironed the last chapter out just right before posting. The team reaction to Murdock's fall, their vigil at his bedside, his long rehabilitation, B. A.'s unwillingness to accept no for an answer, all of it combined to make this chapter simply amazing. I know I will be reading this entire story again in the future.

Such a good chapter, thanks for updating! Oh I just want more and more! Poor Murdock, I hope BA's hand catches him in mid air before his hits the ground! That scumbag has to pay!

Very intense chapter. Here's hoping B.A.'s reaction time is good.

Do you really had to do this cliffhanger? Or should I say “fell”hanger? POOOOOOOR Murdock! You are so mean to him. It was well worthy to wait to this chapter. The characters are again so spot on! The only bad thing is that we have to wait again for the next chapter.

what a cliffhanger! please update soon!

What a nice action packed chapter! And a nice little cliffhanger to leave it off on too! Can't wait to see the next bit! ;)

Yes! A new chapter to this story! I've been so anxious to see what happened to Murdock. Great cliffhanger. I liked the hints of B. A.'s concern for Murdock and of course the way you have written Murdock himself: determined, courageous, not willing to quit, wanting to take care of Randy all by himself. But now I have to wait to see what happens to him. How can he survive a fall like that? Scary end to this chapter, one that will keep me coming back to see when you have added the next installment.

Happy to have more!

Keep it coming! I love the story line and the character interaction, how it's the plan is coming together! LOL!

You don't know how much I've been eagerly waiting for this follow-up chapter! Been checking every day and night. I'm loving this story so far. Murdock can be one stubborn guy when he's determined. Hope it isn't his undoing. You have also done the characters of Face, BA and Hannibal very well so that I can almost see them in this "episode." Will be watching for the next installment.

Ah, I'm glad to see another chapter up. Love how stubborn Murdock is. Of course he'd want to keep going...that is so very him. Well done. I'm eager to see what happens next. ;)

Love it so far! Great job with murdock, love the whump more please!

FINALLY, a new chapter! It was worthy to wait for this! Poor Murdock, it is so him that he didn’t cry out as he still remembered that he can’t talk. I love the end as BA is watching Murdock and the reference of the Curtain Call. That ois so bad as Murdock knew that when those guys will finish beating him up he won’t be able to play, still he didn’t give himself up. What an unfair thing it is to happen to our hero. Take good care of him, BA!

excellent story cant wait for more!

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way to go murdock!

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