 the female apophis 6/17/03 . chapter 1where in the world did you come up with this idea? |
 Linda 5/27/03 . chapter 1 wow must have taken u along time to rhyme all taht... it was a great story. a continual? i would love to read about what happens next lol |
 er4tsdfsdafsdaf 8/21/02 . chapter 1 hey i like it a lot u said at the start that you go the idea from that buffy esp well i was think of doing one like that 2 cuzz i watch buffy lolz |
 er4tsdfsdafsdaf 8/21/02 . chapter 1 hey i like it a lot u said at the start that you go the idea from that buffy esp well i was think of doing one like that 2 cuzz i watch buffy lolz |
 er4tsdfsdafsdaf 8/21/02 . chapter 1 hey i like it a lot u said at the start that you go the idea from that buffy esp well i was think of doing one like that 2 cuzz i watch buffy lolz |
 er4tsdfsdafsdaf 8/21/02 . chapter 1 hey i like it a lot u said at the start that you go the idea from that buffy esp well i was think of doing one like that 2 cuzz i watch buffy lolz |
 er4tsdfsdafsdaf 8/21/02 . chapter 1 hey i like it a lot u said at the start that you go the idea from that buffy esp well i was think of doing one like that 2 cuzz i watch buffy lolz |
 delonariel 7/29/02 . chapter 1 That was really funny! good work! Daniel's fav. mission story had me rollin on the floor! (starts laughing waaay to loudly at the memory) |
 Brianna1 7/21/02 . chapter 1Absolutely loved it! Must be hard rhyming so much. |
 Kate Anderson 5/15/02 . chapter 1Great idea, and well done too! How on Earth did you get everything to rhyme? Really enjoyed reading this - it made me smile :-) |
 BlueScorpion 5/15/02 . chapter 1hehehe that was good! Really well done! |
 Coffee Bean 5/15/02 . chapter 1Would it make sense if I just said..wow. That was so brilliant. It must have taken you ages. |
 Lady S 5/15/02 . chapter 1This was good. Must've been hard to ryhme everything like that. Good Job!
SEW |
 SailorShipper 5/15/02 . chapter 1That was impresive, very well done. |
 Harriet 5/14/02 . chapter 1Pretty good. Interesting idea, funny too. |