So sweet! But a bit sad

Aww... I love this story! I was looking for Madoka's POV as well. It's pretty rare to find in this fandom. Great job!

That was quite good.

The last sentence confused me; I can think of a number of things it could be referring to and I don't know which one you meant.

But other than that, it's a nicely written short piece.

Ah hell! That cut me good.
Surprisingly intense. It seems strange that it's the shorter stories that sometimes cause overwhelming emotions.

Wow that was really beautiful, I find myself especially liking the last sentence: So when she sold her soul to save her – well – Madoka was only returning the favour, I think it was a nice way of ending the one shot. About the fic being in madokas point of view I agree with you that It should be more stories written that way because almost all of them are from homuras POV.

One last thing, I totally loved the senses metaphor It gave an interesting romanting atmosphere to the story so... well done

I would really enjoy reading another madoka POV story from you so I hope you think about wrinting a new one soon ;D.

wow! This was great! Hope u write more do keep up the good work!

I wholeheartedly agree! There needs to be more stories based on Madoka's perspective of their relationship! I don't know why I didn't find this sooner, but I have now and I have to see it's wonderful!

Ohhh, Madoka. Sweet and heartbreaking and totally believable. She *knows*, ahhhh. /wibbles