|Reviews for Two Bright, Particular Stars|
| Knocks 11/23/12 . chapter 2
A car magazine and dirty thoughts.
Jeeze, my cheeks hurt from grinning so much!
| Guest 10/13/12 . chapter 11
This is totally awesome.
| Alestrel 8/26/12 . chapter 11
Well, I still don;t like Mearing, but that was wonderful.
| Alestrel 8/26/12 . chapter 4
| Guest 7/18/12 . chapter 1
Sorry I'm putting this here, I know it has nothing to do with this, but I'm using someone else's computer and all I can do is put reviews. Regarding that Lovecraft/Transformers fic, did you know there is a series which really does use both? Infestation 2 by IDW.
| LdyGossamer 2/2/12 . chapter 11
This was a wonderfully fresh view of an old cliche (human turned into mech). I enjoyed it very much..
| femme4jack 1/30/12 . chapter 11
iInitiate your imagination module, and have a good time./i
I have, and did ;)
Enjoyed this thoroughly. I very realistic look at the challenges involved in such a relationship.
| Anodythe 1/30/12 . chapter 11
Oh boy...little Charlotte Primes...or Optimus Mearings...
| yamiishot 1/30/12 . chapter 11
There are no words. Those two, god, they're just full of surprises XD
| yamiishot 1/29/12 . chapter 10
Bwahahah :D Most excellent Charlotte, most excellent!
| BuckeyeBelle 1/29/12 . chapter 9
Stories like this one are why I beta-read. It was a privilege to watch this story come together. Reading it now in its final form, I'm able to just enjoy the ride. I've said this before, but I'll say it here too-I love your version of Mearing. She's a real, three-dimensional character here and we can see how she became the director of a vital agency. This is the kind of mature individual that I can see Optimus falling for.
| femme4jack 1/28/12 . chapter 9
This has taken a turn for the fascinating that I had never anticipated. Not that I don't anticipate fascination from your stories, but this particular plot turn was not one I saw coming. I'm enjoying very much, and love the snark between Ratchet and Mearing.
Come to think of it, the way you write her character, she does remind me a lot of how I imagine Elita-1.
| yamiishot 1/28/12 . chapter 8
Yes, don't kill Ratchet yet XD
| White Aster 1/28/12 . chapter 7
eeee. Been reading this and enjoying it. I like how you're approaching them as so alien to each other, and not glossing over the issues they have to deal with on the anatomical and psychological levels.
| yamiishot 1/28/12 . chapter 7
Aaaaw this is so very sweet still, its adorable.