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| rian 2006-03-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseI don't wanna fall in love no more, but I liked your story |
| Shazzy 2004-12-17 ch 1, anon. | abusei like the suttlety of this novel it's bittersweet nature is very much like the anime. but eiri's editor isn't bitchy she's actually very nice but just a little paranoid, the best part is the ending its perfect. |
| Lotus-chan 2004-11-12 ch 1, | abuseOk, this was beautiful. You are so eloquent. In short, I love your writting. |
| dawnstrider 2003-12-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseI must say that I've read many fics on this site for some time; and this is the first to which I felt compelled to respond. That was very nicely written, and pretty deep and realistic, too. It had a nice balance of sweetness and thought (characteristics of my two favorite genres of storytelling)and I especially loved how your descriptions of love overlaped on both Shuuichi and Eiri. Not the newest line of reasoning or method of storytelling, but still told quite well. Keep up the good work :)! |
| Elf Asato 2003-01-11 ch 1, | abuseAhh...cuteness.... |
| Eike 2002-05-27 ch 1, | abuseAww, that's so cute! ^_^ Nicely done. I wish I could say more, but sadly, I'm not good at thinking right now. |
| Mieko Kagetaka 2002-05-17 ch 1, | abuseI loved how you did this fic. How you tapped into the part of Yuki that ponders why he writes what he writes. I like how he ponders more on what real love is and how it's not all honey and strawberries. And how it turned into Shuuichi in the end. :) You are writing more, right? Onegaishimasu?? Thanks for sharing!!! |
| Rekkusha Han 2002-05-16 ch 1, | abuseMmmmm that was real good ^-^! ¬.¬ meh, sounds like me when I'm trying to write..eheheh...aaanyway....^____^ well written and very IC! |
| Mirai Shinranui 2002-05-16 ch 1, | abuseHmm...what to say... It was good. Excellent wording and characterization, though not a particuarly original theme. I liked it thought because it was written well. |
| black vapor 2002-05-15 ch 1, | abuseI liked it. It wasn't out of character or anything. Good, good, good. You're a good author. |
| Anomay 2002-05-14 ch 1, | abuseI really like this story!!!!! The "Love is ..." part is very deep and thoughtful! Can I use them as quotes in my livejournal? ^_^;; |