I don't wanna fall in love no more, but I liked your story

i like the suttlety of this novel it's bittersweet nature is very much like the anime. but eiri's editor isn't bitchy she's actually very nice but just a little paranoid, the best part is the ending its perfect.

Ok, this was beautiful. You are so eloquent. In short, I love your writting.

I must say that I've read many fics on this site for some time; and this is the first to which I felt compelled to respond. That was very nicely written, and pretty deep and realistic, too. It had a nice balance of sweetness and thought (characteristics of my two favorite genres of storytelling)and I especially loved how your descriptions of love overlaped on both Shuuichi and Eiri. Not the newest line of reasoning or method of storytelling, but still told quite well. Keep up the good work :)!

Ahh...cuteness....

Aww, that's so cute! ^_^ Nicely done. I wish I could say more, but sadly, I'm not good at thinking right now.

I loved how you did this fic. How you tapped into the part of Yuki that ponders why he writes what he writes. I like how he ponders more on what real love is and how it's not all honey and strawberries. And how it turned into Shuuichi in the end. :) You are writing more, right? Onegaishimasu?? Thanks for sharing!!!

Mmmmm that was real good ^-^! ¬.¬ meh, sounds like me when I'm trying to write..eheheh...aaanyway....^____^ well written and very IC!

Hmm...what to say...
It was good. Excellent wording and characterization, though not a particuarly original theme. I liked it thought because it was written well.

I liked it. It wasn't out of character or anything. Good, good, good. You're a good author.

I really like this story!!!!! The "Love is ..." part is very deep and thoughtful! Can I use them as quotes in my livejournal? ^_^;;