oberon and titania are ...
't own concrete mixing companies
't go on diets
't go to school
't live in regular family households

Oh lord where do I begin? Starting off, the bastardization of Titania's name, who in their right mind names a kid 'Titania'

Oh I get it she's "titania's daughter that happens to be names Titania"

That is really weak writing.

Also, I have gone through many years of high school and the flat portrayal you have here makes if obvious you have no idea what you're writing about. No football player actually goes around asking out random girls with his fangirls watching. No guy actually has fangirls, that's reserved for badly written anime. Also, you don't write essays for Chemistry, That's just a side note.

Also, her dad's job depends on her going out with one guy at her high school? He must be doing a pretty crappy job already if that's what's going to get him a promotion.

Over all, I suggest you do some major research on what a real high school is like, and not just watch re runs of degrassi.