My, my, what is this? A what-if prequel to the Crash Bandicoot series?

And this 'Neo' these creatures are referring to... could it be The One from The Matrix?

YEEESSS. Musical References. No Church in the wild, by Jay-Z & Kanye West. On their album Watch the Throne.

Great story. I was already hooked with it the first couple of paragraphs, and so far I haven't found anything wrong with the story. No errors in dialogue, capitalization, or anything really. I've actually thought about making my own story for Crash Bandicoot and decided to look at some for ideas since I've never written fan-fiction for a video game, and this is, for sure, one of the best Crash B. stories on here. -

Keep up the great work. :)

Great story so far! I read all three chapters back to back, they were all so interesting. I don't think I've ever come across a story all about Neo Cortex, so I'm really looking forward to reading more of this one. I especially liked the discription of Cortex: "Never the tough guy when sharp objects were involved", definately one of my favoirte parts:) Terrific work with this, can't wait for more!

Bandi-cute

Ah, I was wondering where little Periwinkle was in your story (if this has any conection to the Legends stories at all).

Yay, I've been looking forward to how you would portray Cortex. Can't wait for more.