looooove this story! its awesome that u made it so tht the characters actualy say wat the characters in the game would say. overall my favorite mass effect fanfiction ive read yet. plz make an epilouge!

I''m glad you had the cardiac arrest, as i thought that the Overload would kill/hurt her, and i thought you were just gonna use it as a Deus Ex Machina. So it was good to see some real tension/suspense in this chapter.

Requiescat in pace Ash, you earned it.

Been a very well written, but quickly paced fic.

OMG! I love this! Perfect way to end it!

This was lovely :(. Any chance you're secretly a BioWare writer and this is a preview of what's going to be in the game? I'd love to think so.

i can only dream that this is how the kaidan romance goes in me3 *sighs dreamily* lol but knowing bioware and other peoples objections to the idea it wont happen.

oh well, thats what fan fiction is for after all. great story.

This was the perfect ending! I loved the whole story! Thanks for sharing!

Ouch for Joker! also, i'm not sure that Overload would work, i feel like that would destroy her cybrenetics. Finally, i still don't get how Ash would survive Virmire, far to implausable.

Only one more to go? This has been great till now. I'm looking forward to the epilogue!

this story is amazing! i love it, though i'm rather sad that ashley had to die again. and poor joker!

Damn, she does not have good luck.

Could be worse though.

! ?

You're an evil author! You choose the worst moments to end the chapters! I bet you enjoy torturing us, don't you? I hope there's an update coming soon or... gah! I might die here!

Oh, well, I have no other option, so I'll wait. This was a great chapter, as usual!

Damn.

Omnes una manet nox, et calcanda semel via leti.

—Horace

Requiescat in pace Ash, you earned it.

so sad. oh,the,anticipation, Keep it Up!