Please make more. that's all i can say. make more.

I love how "Slaughter for slaughter" rings. How the entire theme is an 'equivalent exchange', karma in literal, physical form. How the masks of fallen soldiers are equated to the skull of the baby drago in there, blood on the walls to the room filled with jarred guts.

I also like how you put into light that while he did not start the fight, he brought war to their door. How his act of reply, rather than retaliation ruffled their feathers for a fight he was willing to dish right back.

The second bit that especially rings is 'heavy footsteps rattling his bones can reach him'.

The only thing that felt weird, or out of place was: But unless they found access to the air vents... and they have no time.

It's really disjointed and oddly worded? But that's all that sticks out in such a fashion.

Good history. Very well written too. I liked how you described the lab, because seriously that's how anyone would see it, I even felt empathy for the soldiers the first time I played it