Oh My God! I love this story! It's so good! I would write more but I'm at a loss for words! The ending took my breath away!

Wow.

that was REALLY good...

and original!

Hope u carry on writing!

Wow! could you please explain more of what happened in Canada? I love this piece! luna.

WHOA..i was not expecting this...more i hope!

Oh...pleeeeaaassseee! You're killing me here , forget the plot! "Carlos" bursts into the house without any warning on bird woman , Bird woman , being a bird-brain and not having her hair on , is caught in the damn act and they run away and get married! Sheesh...what's with you people and plots?

LOL , joking...It's achtually quite good , though the above would be rather enjoyable...

Hi!

Definitly different! Keep this going, please!

Nan

Ummm Hmmm..Exactly what I was thinking! It had to be HER!

But does the story have to be soo sad? I mean, killing him, by accidnet? The man she loved? Love and death...how would the world keeping spining w/out it?

Please post more soon...

This is an interesting idea. I encourage you to continue, because so far it's very good. Thanks for your time.

ah, so it is a story about H. and C...:) please keep going!

Now that's a cliffie! Please don't leave us hanging to long.

She killed Hannibal? NoooooooooooooO! *gasps for air and claws her way back into her chair* okay, including that, this is a really interesting story. Keep it going!

Hi!

I like your story and how very descriptive it is! So far your doing fine. I hope you continue with more!

Nan

Yeah, please do. I really like to see where this is going. You've got me interested now!

Very promising! more soon?

S

Please continue. I went to the movies to see the film Serendipity, and let me say ANTHING would be an improvement on that! Can't wait for more ;)