 J Luc Pitard 5/16/12 . chapter 1Very funny! So that's why a man would marry a wife and her sisters... Yeah, still not digging it in real life. That's what fan fic if for though. Love the humor and Ranma getting a happy ending! Poor chap deserves one. |
 bosk 4/25/12 . chapter 1Now if only someone could make a doujinshi out of this. XD |
 addisonrose12 3/8/12 . chapter 1im still reading! lol . 3 likin it so far! 3 |
 tenchifew 2/16/12 . chapter 1Hilarious story, great smut.
Very nice oneshot.
Thank you for writing. |
 TharzZzDunN 2/16/12 . chapter 1Great job, loved the effort you put into this story.
Cheers! |
 soulfire524 1/31/12 . chapter 1This was very interesting, but also very weird. I'll also admit, though I have read stories before where there's sorta a harem going on, in Ranma 1/2 I really only like Ranma and Akane together, and not a tribe of females to back her up. I've always loved the how deeply Ranma and Akane's love for each other actually went, but at times wished they were not so insecure so they could express it a little more. I think that, like in your story, sometime someone else might need to intervene and break that ice, though maybe not exactly in that manner.
Your genre says romance/humor, but though it has some humorous bits, there seems to be a lot more LUST than romance and that was the only emotion, other than tired, tense, and anger at the begginning, that you really touched on. I'm not going to put you down for the polygamist marriage at the end their, sometimes its kinda funny, but you have a few kinks in the plot that might have made it more attractive to the reader. Personally I have trouble seeing how any love can be involved in a multiple partner marriage and think that there maybe Lust and possibly affection, but a real romance doesn't stand a chance. However, I try to be open mined, and it was interesting because I read the whole thing and didn't just shake my head and pull out. I was atleast glad Ranma and Akane were together, even if her sister ended up a part of the deal, which they seemed very selfish though and I think the biggest kink is making the story more relatable. And, although I'm not a HUGE fan of this one guy multiple girls he has sex with, even if Kasumi and Nabiki were the ones in control of the situation, I think if you write another story like this there are some things you might need to work on, even if it was just written as a fantasy or arousing piece.I did like how descriptive you were and a person could easily picture what was happening. There was no real confusion, I think you just need to give it a little more soul andmake a few adjustments with the plot and you'll be all set. I still applaude your effort though. Writing is never easy and sometimes it takes a little more courage when you post a more explicit piece.
Oh I wish you luck it making sure your kids do not read this until they are fiftey! ha ha |
 serenityselena 1/30/12 . chapter 1oh my... this is quite the story...
interesting combination and twists too...
Ranma gets a harem and the girls get a husband who appreciates them _ |
 Meh 1/25/12 . chapter 1 This is mislabeled. Please fix so people who aren't interested won't read. |
 Pleasure Delayer 1/25/12 . chapter 1 Well, I didn't finish reading but it's clear that this is NOT 'Romance' genre, let alone a 'Ranma&Akane' fic...
No offense but, can you make proper use of the page options? Some people really don't like this kind of harem stories. |
 Innortal 1/25/12 . chapter 1Awesome and great humor! |
 Kalaong 1/25/12 . chapter 1Good stuff, but you cut off just when things got interesting. We're talking "The first one's expensive, but the rest are free." Or should I say, "The second girl's hard to convince to join the harem, but the rest have precedent." The Tendo girls are the only ones to go crazy? Heh. |
 Pangoria Fallstar 1/25/12 . chapter 1Like always, someone who usually hates something does a better job at it. Excellent and fun read. |
 tuatara 1/25/12 . chapter 1I had been writing a long, detailed deconstruction of everything I didn't particularly enjoy in this story as I was reading it, but it wasn't until I got to the oral screwing of every damn Tendo sister and Akane not freaking out over it that I realized this really was just another ridiculously over-the-top "Ranma gets some from everybody" wish-fulfillment tale to add to the already terribly huge pile. (A pile even bigger than Ranma's junk supposedly is in almost every one of those stories.)
At least it's better written than a lot of them. I'll give it that much. Still didn't enjoy it, though…and that had nothing to do with it being a lemon. |
 Heh 1/25/12 . chapter 1 This should be labeled Ranma & Harem, not Ranma and Akane. Another senseless lemon. |
 Dumbledork 1/25/12 . chapter 1I enjoyed this. I wouldn't mind a few more chapters. |