*grins and falls off chair*

Lovely, just lovely. I am a little concerned about how Sev is going to get out of this, but I know you know what you are doing.

Oh... Poor Lucius. Can't get it quite right. I feel sorry for Severus, too. Doing the right thing means hurting poor little Luc. Severus is right, sex on the second date is moving a bit fast, but wanting to please someone the way Lucius was isn't slutty in my opinion, although a little stupid, since it wasn't even really what sev wanted.

MORE MORE MORE! It's so sweet! *hops off nursing her toothache*

Aww! How adorable is this!

Hi Snape taking Lucius to Disney Land... oh, why do I find that sort of hard to imagine ' but it' cute _

As I said before - so, so, so sweet. this really is a unique look at their 'first date' situation, without all the usual power games. I loved the image of them going into 'It's a Small World' and laughing their heads off. I loved the way they got subtly closer throughout the day. I loved the parting kiss. So, so sweet.

Oooh, I really liked this. I know everyone has said it before, but the dynamic really *is* different and they seem so plausibly like teenagers here - both so unsure of themselves, but in different ways. Very sweet, but that in itself sets up sooooo much tension in how you're going to deal with the issue of their future 'Death Eaters' personalities. Interesting!

Armand, what can I say? Lovely. I am really enjoying the different take you have on the Severus/Lucius dynamic. To have Severus as the agressor, and Lucius as the shy, younger one...very interesting.

I'm loving this. Can't wait for the next part

Oooh...there *is* more. (ref. prequel)

Interesting change of roles. Usually fics put Lucy in the role of the more dominant, aggressive partner when he is paired with Severus. I like it. (My Lucius muse was screaming throughout the entire fic, but just ignore him.)

Nice insert - reference to Lestrange. Tirade - Lucius is good at those.

Part 3?

Eagerly awaiting.

Hmmmm, interesting beginning. I had to smile when Lucius launched into his speech about the merits of their relationship. His choice and pattern of words was perfect, a subtle blend of modern and archaic. Lovely.

I did feel that Lucius may have been a bit mean in this. I am not sure if this was what you were looking for, but he was nasty; leading Severus on and then off-handly analysing his physical charms during the kiss. But hey, you wouldn't be the first person to use a nasty!Lucius, and I do love him when he is evil.

Good work, keep it up. I will be back to read more.

Morghaine.

:giggle: that was quite amusing

I like that you kept Snape's big nose :) Lucius was quite amusing in this fic, his babbling was classic. You fancy Snape as older? I picture Lucius as the older of the two because Draco and Harry are in the same year and Harry's parent's would have been quite young. There can never be enough SS/LM :) If you were to write more, I would be here to read it and make rambling comments.