Wow this is a good story I just have one thing to point out though. I don't know if anyone already told you this but that jetpack thing you were talking about is actually called a PAK and I'm pretty sure it's permanently attached to every Irken. I'm not trying to be mean or anything I just thought you should fix that, and if you have good job. Also I lol'd last chap when GIR went to hug APU and he was like "don't touch me"

when are you going to wright more?

plz wright more! i must know what happens!! great story

Hey,I remember reading this fic along time ago. I have to say the writing is very good and the way you wrote it made it an interesting read. Something I want to point out, and not be mean about in any way. Zim is OOC. I wouldn't jump into love on the first chapter like that. It's good that you have a past refference over there, but if it was more of a developing feeling of love gradually, it would have made more sense. Very interesting way of displaying Irken reproduction. I congratulate you for having alot of guts to put that up, because there are plenty IZ fans who don't agree with that. Especially on people can get touchy on that subject, so Kudos for that. I'd say that, for what I can remember, I might be wrong, but alot of people liked your character. It's good that Dib was in character and kind of oppsed your OC but I don't really remember this. I just remember your character being well liked by too many characters, which is walking the road of a Mary sue. Gaz, I barely remembered but I think she'd be disgusted with the smeets in my opinion. Back on that scene with the school dance. That was a bit too cliche` because I've read tons of fan-fics with those scenes and making it predictable that there was a sex scene wasn't such a good idea. I'm not sure, doesn't seem like you continued after the children or touched upon their chracter development. It seems as if you ran into a plot hole after they were born. I'm not so sure anymore. I kinda forgot about this fic after awhile but I did remember it. This isn't a flame, I'm just pointing out things that I thought could use some help.

Wow good story! Update!

P.S can next chapter have the tallest finaly ariving to zim's house to find out that zim and zia are chasing there childeren around the base?

Thats it? THATS IT?! You better make a new ending to this cause this is getting interesting.

Wow... this is REALLY good! I really like your work in this you really have a talent! ~_o Please make more...

-kenny-

Hey Invader Sam, this is Invader Johnny with my second account, anyway I really like this story and I`m hoping you`ll finish it.
aIf yiu aren`t well I enjoyed reading it and MAYBE you can let me borrow the plot IF you want to that is.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.

What can I say? I mean... god this is THE BEST invader Zim story I have ever read. I'm telling the truth. You've managed to keep all of the original cast in character, and that is a pretty hard thing to do. I just love fics were Zimmy gets kids. Please update! first read this in september 04' I'm still waiting for a new chapter. And I'll wait another YEAR if I have to. Please...

This is one hell of a story you really should continue with it, you capture the IZ characters very well and I can´t wait for next chapter.
You will finish it right ?

that was interesting. star wars, eh? and men in black? well, I've never seen them combined with zim before, but your plot is interesting...

Heh-heh, Apu is right. About the twins needing dicsipline, I mean. But they ARE cute. :)

I can't wait until that egg hatches either! Heh, I wonder if Zim's 'boys' dream is gonna' come true. ^ ^/

BWA-HA-HA! Poor Dib, taking his little SISTER to the dance. How humiliating. ;)

I loved the idea of Zim and Zia dancing to 'Grease'. Heh. Excellent work!!

This is such a cute story! ^ ^/

Zim is a teensy bit OOC, though; but that's quite common and perfectly okey-dokey with me. :)

Gonna' add this fic. to my fav.s!!