|Reviews for Mary Anne's Final Summer Moments|
| anna 11/8/12 . chapter 4
Mr. Spier, not Mr Spier. Also, don't keep on using said. It would also be At least she knew how I felt about losing a best friend to an illness, not of an illness.
| anna 11/8/12 . chapter 3
So, this is third person's POV right? I like third person the best because it involves many character's perspectives. Awesome job!
| anna 11/8/12 . chapter 2
That's really cool, that her shirt became famous. Oh, by the way, what's a belly shirt? Is it an American garment, or the like?
| anna 11/8/12 . chapter 1
Four A.M., not four am. Otherwise, great! Like the story idea!
| ama 11/8/12 . chapter 7
Your story is actually not that bad, and I really admire your integrity for keeping on posting chapters, even though you only have one review! Great job!
| It's Nicki Minaj Bitch 2/16/12 . chapter 1
Even though your stories are in dire need of a grammar check, you don't give up. You don't let the bad reviews bother you. You continue to post your stories, no matter what. Your stories have great concepts; you do not need to have Mary Anne sick or a friend dying or her having nightmares in each chapter or story. When people (nicely) give you advice, they're not being mean. They just want to help you improve.