AH! I love it! Need more chapters. Please, please continue this story when you can.

really good so far, but i'm probably biased because i'm taking german classes '

Now here's a writer I can respect. Good detail, plot emerging, not fully out yet, but emerging from the beginning (I'm only on chapter one). Good story.

Just ahve really one complaint. Reploids don't bleed well maybe oil or something but think about it in any of the games have you seen a reploid bleed. Otherwise has potential not sure where you'll take it though

i don't know whether to laugh or to cry! those poor hunters are having terrible time for sure!

this fic is cool. please do continue, and oh.. when will you tell us the huntrees' name?

I like the story and all but why would a cave flooding be a problem for reploids? Unless you are just doing your own thing with this story and leaving the game versions of them alone. At any rate update fast, not many good Megaman X stories being done anymore D

That was a very well-written story. I especially liked your unique creativity, including German and normal, everyday items such as boomboxes and such. I only have a single, small complaint: I don't know much about the games, but would a beam sword actually have blood on it? Also, unless these are your own types of reploids, would they have blood? It doesn't seem that way in the games that I have actually seen...oh well. Keep it up! _

Not that I want to nitpick or something (since my English is everything but perferct, I really shouldn't *lol*), but there are some mistakes with the German parts you added. (If you want to have it corrected, just send me a short email *g*)

But the story itself is great, I really liked it :-)

So far, so good! _ I know a little bit of German, and there might be just a FEW little kinks in the story with the German, but that's hardly noticable (heh, I found it the third time I read over it _ Very hard to find). Keep up the good work, and I'm still waiting for chapter four!

Pretty cool but I'm pretty sure 'Schiesse' doesn't mean 'shit' it mean somethin' else...

Aiiee! I like this a lot! You'd better hurry up, and don't keep me in suspense! I really like the way you've added the little german touches... I'm glad I can pronounce german correctly! I_I