OH MY GOD. FREAKING AWESOME I LOVE IT

I really like this. I just posted some stuff for Nevermore so please check them out. Your story is well rounded and I would love to see more chapters for this.

I liked it. Very well done. Good job! I hope you keep on writing!

this fanfiction was great! you really do have a talent!

Great story! I especially like the protectiveness Varen feels toward Isobel. You're off to a really great start here! You definitely have potential with your writing, and I'd definitely like to read more fanfictions by you. You wrote a great Pinfeathers, too.

- Voldy's Gone Moldy and yours truly from "Nevermore by Kelly Creagh" ;P