Really good. Few spelling mistakes.

Under George, you wrote Georgeis... Over all, it was great.

GREAT! Finally some wash action! I loved this chapter please please please update sooooooooon!

lol please write more soon !

I liked it. I'm still missing wash because you listed her as a main character and she didn't show up yet. I would change the age in 16/17 I don't know what you did with 15 but I didn't steel rovers, broke into builings and danced drunk and half naked...I know she is very mature but still 15 is a bit too young for my taste. I totally like the story and I can't wait for your next update :D

Haters gonna hate...ignore flamers. I learned that lesson too. Haven't read it all yet, I'll review when I do. Just wanted to tell you to keep going regardless of what the flamers are saying. You had the guts to publish your idea. "Fanficpolice" is hiding behind an anonymous review. I guarantee they've published nothing worth reading. Just keep on keeping on! I'll review once I'm done reading everything.

This is cute!

I CAN NOT STOP!

WOW please do not believe a word of what Fanficpolice said he/she is justa anonymus and just makes fun of you he s** and not your story!

update and make the next chapter longer

This is the stupidest story I have ever read, it sux!

I kind of like it but so far I'm not 100% sure because it's just to short so please update soon! (but i really like era she seems like someone I would like and I like the start of your story keep up the good work):D