Nice update, cool Xander/Willow conversation. I'm betting that Amy is gonna die soon, one way or another; Wes and Lilah will either kill each other or end up in bed together, I can't tell which yet. More soon!

An amazing chapter

Cool new chapter, Amy seems to be getting worse and worse and I figure the Senior Partners are going to get up to something really bad soon. But the best part was the end scene with Xander! That was an interesting take on Nikki Wood, her having a superiority complex; and I liked how Cordelia has started to feel the glimmerings of jealousy after watching Willow and Xander hug. I hope we see more of this fanfic soon.

Another awesome chapter.

Good to see the latest update for this story. It was a bit short, with basically just people talking, but I'm sure the action will pick up soon. Until next time!

Great chapter

Great to see another chapter of this fanfic, and it was good to see Richard Wilkins as well. He was one of my favorite villains on the show! Looking forward to what you come up with next.

Yet another amazing chapter.

fuck, im a tad disappointed that Wilkins isn't doing the immortal thing but what are you going to do? seriously Nice how big of a threat he is going to be, I also like that there is the kingdom and the contenit, also its vary good that you have the free city states ideal makes it such a nice chaotic mess!

do hope he gets to bitch slap some people!

but I really like this aspect of the medevial part. its harder to get to each other territories os either your going in balls to the wall and big FIGHTS or doing small spy stuff it makes interactions more explosive and interesting! ah well good luck!

Not a bad chapter, even though not much seemed to happen apart from a lot of talking. It was kind of funny to see Xander get angry at Buffy that way; definitely not love at first sight, like on the show. It should be interesting to see how Cordelia reacts to finding out Angel's a vampire too. I hope we see more soon!

Another awesome chapter.

Well I like how this is urning out even if It feels kinda predetermined that Xander will match up with cordilia not that I have problem with the relationship per say. just considering all the other romances hes had it feels kinda tame amongst other things especially here a princess and her guard! ehh. Two teenagers who found themselves hunting creatures in the night is a tad batter.
It would annoy me if any pre couples things were predetermined you know? sure the ones already in a relation ship or were leading into one fine but as intresting as Couples born in fire can be a princess that at this point cant add anything save for ownership in the castle AT best...

ahh never mind that was me talking WAY to much about romance crap while charecteration is a big thing especially intreactions I hope everyone gets to know each other better.
I cann not WAIT for the master return he was a fun fella calm and reserved in some ways we dont see anymore and he was an actuall MASTER vamp

so! Xander has managed to piss of spike, jessie and perhaps our dear seer vampire I do love regular humans getting invetive against the vampires and other creatures even with the supernatural and medevial imes as a whole I say we are the most dangerous game probabl because we mutant real well and we have a bunch of half human and something else that go with humans making us an utterl random species.
Well im guessing here in your story so What do I know?
Its intresting as well that Xander who is a main charecter with the master here is out cold while the rest of the hero group talks
with this many voltile elements Hes going to have to be a peace keeper.
Its going to be a shame as well that he wont be afriend of buffy or trufully willow for that mater here and how defecive she is with Angel and Xander feelings on the matter(Jessie is alive they have a witch that can give someone a soul oh crap she could do it to spike to or any of the others)
but eh Im curious how everyone will react diffrently as charecters to each other while they are in diffrent circumstances

Fairly good chapter, not a lot of action but never mind. I am curious about one thing though; just how old are the characters? Initially I thought the main characters were all teenagers, and this was the equivalent of Buffy season one; but from what Amy said in the last chapter, she and Xander and Cordelia and the rest are all twenty-something years old?

Yet another awesome chapter.

Some cool fight scenes, and you seem to be moving the plot along quickly. I THOUGHT Drusilla would know the difference between Angel and Angelus! And Xander as the Last Man Standing was handled pretty well (Angel doesn't count, as a vampire). I'm curious where you're going to take it next; I assume Wesley, Gunn, Fred and Lilah are going to be showing up soon? I hope you update the story quickly!