HOLY CRAP AN UPDATE YESSSSSSSSSS

Love it. The wait was definitely worth it, I love the time jumps. I cant wait to read how it turns out!

Well - I have to say that this is really, really interesting so far! The beginning pulled me in xD Although I sense some slight, 'Bring It On' stuff xDD I'm really looking forward to reading more.

I like how Deuce was just chomping on his snack and Cleo, despite trying it, still didn't overly like it xD

I mean it when I say this is interesting though! I caught a couple spelling errors here and there but it didn't take away from the great job you did on the first chapter. Good for you!

A friend and I have our current story going on in this section, it's called 'Rhinestones' and we're not really following the webisodes exact or whatever, I've never read the diaries but yeah xD Anyway, hope to read more soon! ]