Nooooooo...it doesn't suck :D i love your story :3333

It didn't suck. I thought it was good. I liked how you used the word ain't in your dialogue. I say it all the time, but my little sister is always like: "Ain't's not a word." My comeback is: "Is too. Look it up. It's called slang."

Anyways, I saw some minor grammar issues, but it was pretty good. I'm not even good with grammar so it doesn't faze me. Like my teacher always says: "If I could spell, I could rule the world."

I don't think there were any spelling issues. I only wish it was longer. Not bad for your first fic.

It didn't suck it was actually really nice and sweet. You should write more like this :)

So cute! It didn't suck! It was utterly adorable!

Short but sweet, the only thing which could make it better would be for it to be slightly longer so we can have more ItaDei :D

it's soooo cute! liked it very much!