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| Reviews for MotoX: Andy Carson's POV |
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  Jon 12/12/12 . chapter 1 Sweet |
 Fanpire109 10/14/06 . chapter 1i thinkyou shoudl update it |
| ranchoaz 7/18/06 . chapter 1 love it so far update soon |
| Giggly Pancakes 2/26/05 . chapter 1 I LIKE IT! KEep going! |
| banks'-gurl-99 2/15/05 . chapter 1 i like it! :) please keep up with the story and please update soon. great job! |
| Black Fire Kitsune666 10/28/03 . chapter 1 Cool fic pz update soon. |
| Mandy Kay Miller 8/30/02 . chapter 1 well, this is pretty good, however i must admit i'm a bit confused. so... this doesn't follow the SCRIPT of the movie, right? just the basic plotline? i think it needs a bit more setting, just to settle my confusion, but other than that very good. you've kept andy in character really well, as well as his dad (lol, "Dad glared at me, but said nothing... It was only a matter of time til he lost it. I was hoping we'd be on our way home..." hehe, that's SO his dad!) anyway, now that i've quoted half the chapter, i'll go. good work, update soon! |
| Aaliyah-Charity 6/9/02 . chapter 1 Wow, I like this story so far. I like how you look from other people's perspectives. |
| hotchick 5/18/02 . chapter 1 Great story I hope you kepp on R&R my storie its called "The Girl Next Door".Keep up the storie I hope you write more. |
| Sailor Gemini 5/15/02 . chapter 1 that is so kawaii...u gotta finish it... *sigh* read my fics, everyone! |
