|Reviews for Nightmare's Just Beginning|
| Blackrose715378 4/15/12 . chapter 1
Well you write action better than I ever could - was definitely able to see it all happening in my head as I wrote it. Keep it up!
| SarQueen4 1/27/12 . chapter 1
I like it! It was like watching a trailer for a new action movie. I really hope to see more(With Rachel, perhaps?).