I can't believe this only has 2 reviews. Do people not love Hustle? StAsh is only THE greatest pairing!
Well, I loved it. Cheers for the pick-me-up :)

A fantastic tie-in with Picasso Finger Painting. I really enjoyed it, how it stressed the responsibility thrown at Ash during that con, its references to previous series, and tying up loose ends - mentioning June had died for instance, and finally the shocker at the end. Well done!

I really like both the ideas in this story and the style and language it's written in.

But... and please don't take this the wrong way - it really does need to be in paragraphs for ease of reading. I found it difficult to settle into the flow of the story because I was constantly checking that I was reading the right line.

You have talent, creatively speaking, and I would like to read more of your work based on this short sample - but it *does* need paragraphs!

Handy x