This is extremely realistic... I like it. :D

Other than a raised eyebrow when they were at Hit! (why would Shane offer Kit a drink? she's an alcoholic) this story was a good read, thanks :)

damn great ending! those two were so passionate together

ddaaaaamn that last line was hard but true. poor carmen and shane!

Fantastic story.. loved it. You should definitely write a sequel :)

A whole bunch of typos towards the end and I couldn't really get into it at first, but I just wanted to say that your note at the end is absolutely hilarious.

as much as i hate to see stories end, i feel i have to agree on this one. it is a great ending, although i do believe in the sequel. you should write a follow up and maybe make it for a year or two down the line and have bette and tina returning for their wedding that will take place this time. although it should be something simple, i think helena over-did the original anyways. thanx for sharing, beth.

Haha no bras, please!

This is great.

I love any story that has Sharmen together in the end...so you can leave it as is. I thought the series ending sucked too. Thanks

Ooooh! You know, I have tears in my eyes :o)

Thank you for the update. Nicely done. I like it. I think that you shouldn't try to write a sequel just cause you feel you have too. Sure I want to read lots more about these two but I say wait until you want to write one. If you are satisfied with it as is for the time being I say leave it as is. Another huge thank you for giving us a completed fic. I will be keeping an eye out for that sequel and if it appears I have no doubt I will give it a try.

I've loved this story so much; I'm actually going to miss reading it but I do think this was probably the best place to end it. A sequel sounds good though :D

Please update :-)

Please update :-)

This is a nice fanfic'.

Can't wait to know what happens next, keep going :)