Magus in an apron... this story is made of win! lol, great!

not bad. It is really funny

I usually HATE parodies but this was very funny on some parts. "CLUE? YOU BITCH!" Haha xD I can't believe I actually liked this.

Funny stuff (:

-Nini

HOLY SHAMOLEY that was FRIGGIN A. YOU ARE MY HERO.

I realize that the point of this fan fiction is to be humorous, so I'll be more gentle than I'd be otherwise with this. This could use a little editing as it has a few spelling and grammatical errors, but it's nothing too serious. While you're screwing up characters, you might as well be consistent; at one point Magus is shown as being fluffy and liking pink, bunny slippers, while at another, he's too embarrassed to put on an apron. I'm sorry to be going on like this, but I'm afraid I really don't like it when people make characters swear in their fan fiction when they don't do that in canon situations. I did find this very amusing, though. I'm happy to see someone else who knows how to spell.

-Rowan

LOL hilarious

LMAOLMAOLMAO ! I swear i was crying i was laughing so hard ! haha brroom attack! lmao lmao lmao

Hahaha, that was awesome! I wouldn't change a thing! (except maybe the cat drowning, but that's just me. )

Hahahahaha, I must email this link to my friends! Great job!

Oh my God... That was WEIRD yet really funny. For some reason, I always had this weird idea that Magus was really Crono's father... and you sort of made that idea come to life. XD That was great!

Funny, and it kept me occupied for 10 minutes. Good job, keep up the good work!

Funiest. Thing. Ever... all I can say... laughing so hard...

that was the dumbest thing ive read all day then again it was the only thing i read all day so it actullay could have been the best thing i read all day but im a pessimist

That was cool emaile me if you put up any chapters

OK... i just want to say that... OMG!

This has to be the funnest CT thing i have ever looked at!

Keep on writing!

As far as stories go, This was pretty much crap. Do the world a favor. Kill youself.