|Reviews for Moonshine Blind|
| Red Molly 2/24/12 . chapter 8
And "Sheriff, we have shot's fired at the Arlo Givens residence." That entire sequence.
I like how you transition from POV to POV and still keep it fluid. Well done.
| Red Molly 2/22/12 . chapter 7
' "Really, you were wondering that?" She grins at him.
"No, Art said to. Art hates me." '
As always, I love the snark. I like the 'gentleman and a scholar' comment too. It's not something I've heard often outside of home. :)
| sophie 2/22/12 . chapter 7
Well, hell, that's a less than impressive intro for Arlo. That said, it was frigging hilarious. Will Ava be to the rescue? Or just Tim and Randi? Can't wait for the next chap.
| Red Molly 2/20/12 . chapter 6
*gigglesnort* This whole chapter. You have Art to a tee. :) And I DO love the back and forth between Tim and Devil. Well played.
| sophie 2/19/12 . chapter 6
Beautiful, although, I've got a lot more sympathy for Tim's dick for following anything of Devil's.
If Boyd and Raylan are alone in Arlo's basement, where's Arlo?
| AndItsOuttaHere 2/17/12 . chapter 6
This just keeps getting better. You have Art down...he's just perfect.
| Afia 2/15/12 . chapter 5
"You bring handcuffs?"
Tim raises an eyebrow and tries not to laugh. "Brought a gun."
Love love love this exchange and this whole chapter.
The villains on Justified are so good and I love you giving Devil more play time than he ever got on the show. Looking forward to your next update.
Thank you for writing and sharing.
PS It just clicked where I recognized your pen name from; if you ever feel like continuing your earlier Justified story, I would be more than thrilled to read it. :-)
| Red Molly 2/15/12 . chapter 5
1) GOOOD song.
2) "...talking to each other mean and easy like they did in high school..." and "He gives her the finger and his little pursed-lip sneer, thinks about hitting her..."
I can see both of these clear as day.
3) "He gestures for her to put it back on the coffee table and draws the blanket back. Randi crawls in between him and the back of the sofa and intertwines her legs with his."
*grouses* Lucky broad. lol
Well drawn, well told. I like!
| Yllek 2/15/12 . chapter 4
Aw shoot, don't give away spoilers at the top of the page. I haven't seen the last ep yet. :(
| Afia 2/14/12 . chapter 4
So enjoying Renata and Tim snapping at each other. It's electric.
| LiveLaughLoveListen 2/14/12 . chapter 5
Amazing! More please :)
| Afia 2/14/12 . chapter 1
Re-reading from the beginning because I'm enjoying this so much.
"... got her clothes off, his clothes off, got her off, and got the hell out of there before the first fingers of daylight stretched across the Lexington sky has him feeling like a man of steel on this fine morning."
What a great line!
| LiveLaughLoveListen 2/13/12 . chapter 3
Love it! Not enough Tim stories out there. Please update soon! :)
| Afia 2/8/12 . chapter 3
Fantastic. I love how Devil is imbued with this very particular menace.
I love Randi and Tim going tete-a-tete. Can't wait for the next chapter!
| Afia 2/8/12 . chapter 2
Great chapter! I loved reading Art's perceptions of the office and of Tim; middle school dance and South Mall Clock Tower, indeed.