Nice job very believable...you captured the characters well. Can't wait to see where this goes. I love Raylan and Tim and hope there's lots more of them to come.

"Rachel is the only one with any sense." lol True that.

That whole last paragraph made me crack up. I approve of the use of the word 'zany' as I have not seen that in a while and it is WHOLLY applicable to Tim Gutterson. My jury's still out on Randi.

P.S. Speaking as a shrink in training, we don't always have to carry a poker face. (grins)

Good story and great voices. I really like where this is going.

This story is fantastic! The characterization is perfect. Can't wait to see where it goes!

This is turning into a very intriguing story right out if the box. Two storylines and both of them pulling me right in. Wonder how Raylan's going to get out if this one?

The OC works well here. Can't wait for more of her and Tim.

The plotting so far is masterful. I love the twists that you're building into the story. It's such a joy to see an original character that's absolutely not a Mary Sue and to see the characters we know evoked so perfectly as you do here.

Kudos and keep up the great writing.

What a great start! There's Raylan in danger and Tim gettin' some! Cannot wait for your next installment.

Great start! I can't wait to see where you go with this.

(raises arms in triumph) YAAAAAAAY Tim an a woman! And a PhD candidate no less. Good for her. Pray continue. :)

I almost didn't read this because I was afraid it was slash. LOL. Whenever it's two men's names in the character box...well...

This is off to a great start. Please don't stop. I want to know if Boyd is a victim or if he tried to kill Raylan. I'm betting on the former.

Whoa! What a beginning!

No criticism here, except that there's no chapter 2.